|Reviews for Unexpected: part 1 - Imperial grooming|
| Eborrose chapter 12 . 2/17
I am enjoying the story though I have to ask why Vader / Anakin hasn't thought of Palpatine having more than one way of keeping tabs on the Skwalkers ie the droids, or making certain of the origin of the painkillers, knowing how cruel and suspicious the Emperor is?
| Jambee chapter 6 . 2/6
ahh poor Luke getting attached and having his abilities taken away by the Emperor like that. Seeing Vader break down and cry got me emotional too.
| sylviajohns chapter 12 . 11/28/2013
Shameless Luke/Vader, I love it! Waiting for more :D
| sylviajohns chapter 9 . 11/28/2013
Heeeyyy... You said you dno't dwell in EU in here we have Mara Jade... Why? Sorry, I just hate her. She so not interesting as a character. But the story is great! We all love evil :
| Fragments of the World chapter 12 . 9/25/2013
I like his cute relationship with his bodyguard, and Mara's reaction to the Noghri is natural, considering all the circumstances. Luke and Mara? yes, I can't wait to see the progression of their relationship...
And, yes, Luke&Vader and the drug reaction was perfect. go go skywalkers!
| Jasaa chapter 12 . 8/22/2013
Nice story so far. Can't wait for more L/M scenes.
| aurebesh chapter 12 . 8/11/2013
Very enjoyable, this chapter is. Love reading it, I did. Well-written, everything is. Fun, the twists are. Bored, you must be, of my monotone (?) reviews, so update soon, you must! Thank you, I do! :D
(Sorry. It's midnight and I just can't sleep... Got nothing else to do.)
| nupinoop296 chapter 12 . 8/10/2013
I'm glad they figured out what was wrong with Luke!
| Amenofis chapter 12 . 8/10/2013
this is very cool, I'm so glad Luke noticed that his moodswings were not natural. Now that they know about this, they can fight it! I feel really sorry for Mara, though, she has really low self-asteem, I think. (Well, she was kind of programmed to), but I'm hoping in time she will realize, just who is the bad guy here. The Noghri is, as always, great (can't spell or pronounce his name, no disrespect meant).
| Albionia chapter 12 . 8/10/2013
An extremely good chapter. No one likes being altered against their will.
| Albionia chapter 11 . 4/22/2013
This is good. I will follow closely!
| Ice Maiden Olivier chapter 11 . 3/5/2013
I loved this new addition! :D
| Treenahasthaal chapter 11 . 3/3/2013
What a perfectly horrible situation for Luke... and for Vader for that matter. And I have no idea how you are going to resolve it all.
I am sorry that you live with on and off pain - but like many writers you capitalise on personal experience and use it in your fiction and that gives a level of realism that readers can identify with.
I'm intrigued with where you are going with this.
| Vana Jedi chapter 11 . 3/3/2013
I always thought Latin was useful,...but then again I mostly used it for insults and yelling Harry Potter-type spells. My favorite one of those was "Venite ad me, lardii!" or in English, "Come to me, bacon!"
| L.C. Lane chapter 11 . 3/2/2013
Hey; this chapter was pretty cool. I LUV Vader's idea of the HRD. It's really clever-and therefore Vader-like-and I'm eager to see where it goes. Also, I'm super glad that Vader's figured out the true plans Palpatine has for Luke.
I was laughing at Mara's bafflement over Luke's lack of interest in her; it was hilarious! It'll be neat to see how she gradually comes to grips with how someone like Luke thinks/feels. I'm sure it'll be shocking for her.
Overall, loved the direction this chapter took the story; of course Mara's found a way to spy; she's such a good little drone herself. Keep up the great work! :)