|Reviews for Toxic and Roost|
| Ten-Faced chapter 6 . 6/20/2013
The cubone is an absolutely adorable cupid with a skull.
I think you gave Janine's personality a very deep and thoughtful analysis. She must have really idolized her father - to argue about him with a dude in a mall is something that takes dedication - and then to figure out that he was a high-ranking member in the criminal organization that goes against her very beliefs must have been absolutely terrible for a young woman.
Thanks so much for the update!
| Pokekid84 chapter 4 . 1/29/2013
You have a right to be proud i'd've read a book like that from bginning to end
| ILikeShorts chapter 5 . 9/8/2012
This surprised me in a good way... there were a few things in the beginning that led me to believe this whole collection would be a bit dark for my tastes. (A child training till she bleeds is kind of an off-putting visual, though I can understand why it'd make sense in Janine's case.) But I kept reading because I love this pairing, and I'm glad I did.
I like how the first two pieces mirror each other... it's a really effective way to show how much Falkner and Janine have in common. And the next few are either adorable or hilarious or both. Some of the bits I loved:
-Them getting kicked out of the Celadon Department Store... I can so see that happening
-Same goes for blowing up the Fighting Dojo
-The idea of Falkner as a "pretty boy wind-rider"
-"Planet of the Aipoms"... I LOL'd
-Other leaders having to referee their disputes
-Falkner being scared of Janine "going ninja"
I do have one suggestion for improvement, because I absolutely love these stories, but there's one issue that detracts from some of them (the ones with dialogue, to be specific). Whenever someone new speaks, it needs to be in a different paragraph from the previous speaker. It's a standard rule of writing, and things can get pretty confusing if you don't follow it.
Other than that, though, the writing in this is excellent. So I hope you fix the paragraphing thing, and I'm looking forward to reading more! :D
| japaneserockergirl chapter 5 . 7/29/2012
Oooh...and the date had been going so well too...well, at least they didn't fight this time. -weak smile-
Keep writing and update soon!
| Ten-Faced chapter 5 . 7/25/2012
The ending was hilarious. Poor guy... but at least chivalry isn't dead yet!
| japaneserockergirl chapter 4 . 6/25/2012
That was a really great chapter! It flowed so smoothly and the except from the novel at the end was a really nice touch. I also like how you went into depth about Falkner's past; it really ties everything together.
| Ten-Faced chapter 4 . 6/25/2012
I can see why you would be proud of this chapter, it's freaking amazing!
Never pegged them as an avid reader, but it certainly is nice to see them like this.
| Ten-Faced chapter 3 . 6/24/2012
Ah, I love this pairing.
Really surprised at the lack of reviews. Children these days...
| japaneserockergirl chapter 3 . 6/23/2012
Note to self: NEVER watch a match between Janine and Falkner. There will be blood-my blood. XD
So glad that someone's doing a one-shot compliation with these two: they just don't get enough love. Keep writing and update soon!