Reviews for Eyes
0987632424192 chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
oh my gosh! I never really seen Zelda or whatever so I don't know much about this, but it's intense like... I THOUGHT YOU WERE SOME EXPERIENCED ADULT WRITER! Like, I mean your writing is so mature! WHY DIDN'T YOU TELL ME YOU COULD WRITE LIKE THIS HUH? THIS STORY DESERVES MORE THAN TWO REVIEWS. AND YOU HEARD THAT OTHER REVIEW! ITS DESCRIPTIVE AND TOO MATURE TO BE IN MY PRESENCE!
I mean, really? You never told me you wrote like this! So good and suspenseful even though I don't know much about Link! You even made me scream above about your too good to be true writing skills! :O *jealous* *jealous* *veryjealous*
Keskron chapter 1 . 6/22/2012
The pacing in this story is excellent; not only does your choice of words annunciate your literacy, but also produces a situation with a tempo that's swift, but descriptive enough to want me to keep reading. Are you planning on making an entire story out of this? If so, I look forward to it! If not, I hope to see more writing from you in the future, because this was very well done!