Reviews for Forgiven
LouiseKurylo chapter 2 . 9/18/2015
Nice summary of the episode. And now we get to the part where you embellish canon. Good set up.
lollierocks chapter 8 . 8/26/2012
i love this story it amazing please please please write more xxxx
alwaysjisbon-bw chapter 8 . 8/25/2012
hi! so i think in the upcoming chapters maybe something should happen at work in front of the team...not something sexual or whatever...but something with deeper meaning. maybe jane hypnotizes lisbon or something like that and she accidentally reveals something... i think it would be good just to have some lighthearted, typical jane/lisbon stuff... (:
mentalistrealove chapter 8 . 8/11/2012
this was terrific! you had me getting tears in my eyes for a while there...this is what i really love & I'm so happy I finally found such a great author who understands the best part of their relationship...and thank you eternally for the no sex :D
Xo, Stana
mentalistrealove chapter 6 . 8/11/2012
thank you for being the only author ive read who actually pays attention to the fact that jane is still in love with angela, so its hard for him to be with lisbon... and thank you for no sex scenes so far!
MysticalWhispers chapter 8 . 8/12/2012
wonderful lovely please continue
TrustFalls chapter 8 . 8/12/2012
I think, I will try the yelling part. This chapter was way to short! (I know, I know, but I'm an egoistic reader, so I want more).
Ah, back to topic. What I liked about this chapter was, that Lisbon denid him she right to ask-and her angry reaction at his promises. Janes pleading attitude was hard for me to believe, but looks like he really ment it this time. But he had nearly lost her, so this is okay.
If I was Lisbon, I would be angry, again, for the last sentence. This confession was hard for her to make, and he again goes with "I know"? But thats Jane.
What I want for the upcoming parts...Hmm, I'd like Jane trying to play the perfect boyfriend, his list of things he'd give to her was rather interesting (and maybe you could finish of the pony thing for me. What happend to it?)
Waiting for more-
Little-Firestar84 chapter 8 . 8/12/2012 sweet, and a bit sad as well, for rteresa's fears...
Shelly chapter 7 . 8/8/2012
Please update
TrustFalls chapter 7 . 8/10/2012
Okay. Have to say, I think Jane acts rather cruel in this chapter. Because he HAS to know, that she loves him, one way or the other way round. While else would she have slept with him or made this confession about "having sex with him any day of the week" or (which I loved most) say "And I need you. Doesn't look like either of us are going to get what we want"?
He's the one, that ran off, he wanted her forgiveness and he hasn't really explained anything to her. I know, he is Jane, but leaves a bad taste.

It's not about me not liking your story (hope, it doesn't sound so).I'm waiting for the next chapter, even when you're saying it will be "angsty"makes me fear it will be sad again.
Country2776 chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
this is a fun take on this episode cool
Little-Firestar84 chapter 7 . 7/13/2012
dog's so sweet, i have to admit, one of my fav character on the whole story:)
waiting for more?
Aania71 chapter 7 . 7/13/2012
Wow nice chapter I love it!
LuluRoss chapter 4 . 7/5/2012
I love this story. You're doing a great job! At first I thought that Jane was acting more childish than usual. I've just been reading way too many fanfics lately that have him acting like a mature adult. That's not his true character at all! He is childish, and silly, and loves to harass Lisbon! I should be sleeping but I'm too sucked in to your story to stop reading! Thank you so much for writing this!

If I guessed your age based solely on your writing I would say you're over 18 but I'm thinking that your username Allz1298 probably means you were born in 1998. Which would make you 14? If that's the case then you should really be proud because this is an excellent, well written story! No matter your age this is a fantastic story, and I'm a college tutor who has to read a lot of stories! Great job!
It'sTheLittleThings chapter 6 . 7/2/2012
Pllleeaassse update soon :) I'm loving this story 3
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