Reviews for The Fallen Renegade
Urgazhi chapter 20 . 11/9/2021
Good damn where you left this.

I don't like Benjamin's attitude...
DarkBan chapter 20 . 10/20/2021
Hello author! shame you gave up or abandoned the story, but it was shapping to be AMAZING!
I just discovered (as i hadn't been reading any kind of FF) but this one was damn enjoyable :)
What a place to stop too! hahahaha

Still, thanks for the time and effort you put into these 20 chapters, loved them, hope you're having an amazing time :)
Bostonette chapter 1 . 7/14/2021
Clearly a supporter of spousal abuse judging by how you found it funny to have Lilly threaten all the males and tell us she always kept her promise. You fucking bastard
Li-Ion89 chapter 17 . 6/3/2021
I really like ur dumbledore the way he doesnt want aries going into this path but realizes that he is powerless against forces that are far powerful than him and his society. Hes a realist but also a utilitarian easy balance lol
Li-Ion89 chapter 12 . 6/2/2021
No wait isnt the contract null because he renounced his true name of potter? Lol
Li-Ion89 chapter 11 . 6/2/2021
God is being horny aries' only personality? Thats actually really sad no input whatsoever. Loving the battle scenes but him wanting to fuck anything that moves is abit disgusting for this kind of fic jfc
Li-Ion89 chapter 8 . 6/2/2021
Damn another manhwore harry sadge
Li-Ion89 chapter 6 . 6/2/2021
now why are you just copying the exact order from shezza? thats kinda weird lol you coulda made your own
Li-Ion89 chapter 5 . 6/2/2021
why are you making this harry horny all the time for gods sake just because he is in a presence of s exual being he does not have the knowledge to actually be attracted to anything other than a disney princess this is only the pitfall of your twist to DR. like him jaded and an asshole but being this sexual manwhore aint working in his favor
Uday Sra chapter 20 . 5/17/2021
darthkratos24 chapter 4 . 1/29/2021
A lot heavier on the Christian crap then expected but I suppose I can slog through it
itioministralis chapter 13 . 1/13/2021
Why is Aries even talking to his parents? I don't undestand. Why is it in every WBWL fic they have to go back to their family, tell of their abuse? Why is he bragging about killing basilisks? The entire thing with the sword is too childish too. Overall, the whole fic feels like what children would write about "cool" adults. Oblivion NPC style dialogues with little sense and a lot of bragging
IchaichaManager chapter 20 . 12/11/2020
Vuelve por favor
Sypho Dias chapter 3 . 8/28/2020
Why is a pee teen thinking about boobs...? That's a bit creepy ya know. Ah what the hell. I think I was like that too. Damn... I hope nobody recognized me for who I was those days... a complete and utter pervert. Hope there's going to be some smut scenes though! Would love to see some. And love medical. She's awesome!
Sypho Dias chapter 2 . 8/28/2020
Hmm... why didn't he use a memory charm on her?
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