Reviews for Never On My Mind
Bk chapter 24 . 11/26
So, this hasn’t been updated in almost 4 years and it’s completely heartbreaking. This story is such a great concept. I would love to see you finish it! Idk if you even still get your reviews or not but I had to leave this. I loved this when I followed you posting it and I still love it. If you ever finish it, I’ll be here. Waiting to read the end. In my head I picture how it goes, but there are so many ways it could happen... anyways, just wanted you to know, I still love it.
twilight-et-the-vampire chapter 24 . 11/12
J'ai vraiment hâte de connaître le dénouement de cette histoire
annie.jo.marie chapter 24 . 11/11
So... will the imprint break? Can’t Sam just tell him to remember? Isn’t the Imprint Bond supposed to be stronger than the Alpha Order? Could Bella be told? More soon please!
luminastra chapter 24 . 10/22
I'm going to guess that since the last update was like 3 years ago that this won't be continued? Just wanted to leave a littletter review and let you know that people are still reading it and it rocks :) I hope one day you finish it.
Jen
Soledad Sanchez chapter 9 . 9/29
the pattern ? I don't get it yet !
Born in 20th Century chapter 9 . 9/17
I still haven't worked out the pattern :'00
Born in 20th Century chapter 7 . 9/17
I'm rereading this and I'm not sure I get the pattern - why has Paul imprinted again just now and not earlier? I mean, between the moment he imprinted on Bella in the first chapter with sam telling him to forget about it and now, his imprinting again, he's had plenty of opportunities to see Bella and re imprint but why imprint again only just now and not earlier?
Born in 20th Century chapter 1 . 9/17
You changed your author's username! Just wondering though are you going to continue this story? :D
Guest chapter 1 . 9/3
Yes great story but Are you ever going to finish it? I would be nice if you could let the people who have enjoyed and also took the time to comment on your writing abilitys know weather or not you intend to finish it would only take a moment of your time to answer yes or no and would be the polite thing to do I really don't mean to sound rude but this is honestly the best one I've ever read not just attention to detail and clever writing and story skills but a genuine heart felt story with a decent plot line and no over the top bullshit it's honestly lovely a story I truly enjoyed and wish to see finished or at least know if it ever will be hands down best one I've read pls just take the time to let the fans know! XxX
g8rreader chapter 24 . 8/9
I know its been a while but Ive got my fingers crossed you will be inspired to finish this! Such a great story:-)
g8rreader chapter 23 . 8/9
Ive really enjoyed this story, like to the point of being obsessed! Couldn't walk away! I'm sad to only have one more chapter! Ive loved your other short stories about Paul and Bella, they would make great longer multi chapter reads. I was sad to see they'd been taken down, I really did enjoy them and I'm really picky!
Anon chapter 24 . 7/21
This story is fucking amazing. I know it hasn't been updated in 2 years, but I had to say it. Even incomplete, it's fucking fantastic.
xSilentSakurax chapter 24 . 7/19
I loved this story. It felt very realistic and natural. (Much more so than anything in the actual books) You also somehow managed to make me okay with imprinting. haha. I also liked you take on Bella's reaction to the Cullens leaving in book two. Her behavior always felt unnatural to me. Within the context of addiction and withdrawal, however, it makes a lot of sense. You used so much canonical evidence to back it up that it felt like a natural explanation. (Made more sense than the actual explanation, in my opinion)
mum2shane chapter 24 . 7/13
Oh please update I really want to know what happens!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/6
Ok
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