|Reviews for Never On My Mind|
| Guest chapter 24 . 2/11
Thank you for your story. Best I’ve read in a while. Did you complete it in your head at least? I hope you did.
| Candylover778 chapter 1 . 1/6
| Lemonmelons chapter 24 . 12/4/2020
Oh no no no - you left this fic! I probably shouldn't feel upset about it at all but somehow I do. Thanks for what you did write down, though. I enjoyed it!
| Lemonmelons chapter 23 . 12/4/2020
my question is: does bella really not want to tel edward anything to his face?
| Lemonmelons chapter 17 . 12/4/2020
there is a thumb/tongue mixup near the end
| Lemonmelons chapter 14 . 12/4/2020
pretty sure that charly would NOT call Bella "swan".
great story! thank you
| bkhchica chapter 24 . 10/27/2020
Yeah... I know it’s been a long time, but I’d really love to see this one finished. It’s amazing. I love it!
| thespeedfxrce chapter 24 . 10/15/2020
I’m so glad I read this story because it was fantastic but man, of all the places to decide to stop writing... it was this scene. Got me all kinds of fucked up.
| thespeedfxrce chapter 18 . 10/15/2020
"Bella!" Alice's voice rang out like a bell, beautiful and clear, but it still sent the birds above fluttering from their trees. Predator.
| thespeedfxrce chapter 16 . 10/14/2020
I think the Twilight series wouldn’t have caught so much flack if This Bella was what Stephanie had written.
| thespeedfxrce chapter 15 . 10/14/2020
Fuuuuuuuck! I just knew it was them. Ugh I hate them. But also, I’m living for the potential - no, inevitable - dramaaaaa
| thespeedfxrce chapter 13 . 10/14/2020
I don’t think I’ve mentioned this but I’ve said it once I’ll say it again: Charlie is my favorite book/movie father.
| thespeedfxrce chapter 12 . 10/14/2020
Bella repeating the Polly namesake idea was - heart eye emoji to the max.
I love that Linda is just awesome. But I also love that Paul hates her even though he knows she’s awesome. This was a great chapter, I loved meeting Paul’s fam! I can’t believe it’s only been two weeks that they’ve been “together”. It feels like forever! In, like, the absolute best of ways.
| thespeedfxrce chapter 11 . 10/14/2020
impressive in sweaters
autocorrect does it again! I love their dynamic so much! Bella and Paul’s but also the packs. A lot of people skip over Kim but I love that you’ve given her a little something here - even in her brief time on the page. Paul recognizing that Jared’s thoughts miss out on some of her personality is 10/10.
I like that Paul and Bella almost have this opportunity to fall in love sort of with and sort of without the imprint.
| thespeedfxrce chapter 5 . 10/14/2020
Wow I wonder where Bella would have ended up if people gave a damn in this way for her