Reviews for Never On My Mind
Brookeahlynn chapter 24 . 5/17
I love this story. I have spent about 3 days reading in my spare time and I absolutely love it . I hope you come back to finish it
Guest chapter 24 . 4/18
hhhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaa i love this historyyyyyyyyyyyy I translation his for lear ! hhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
stephaneeee chapter 24 . 2/23
This. Story. Holy moly. You have created such a vivid and incredible character in Paul, you write his POV in such a way that I feel alongside with him and I want so badly to jump into the story and give him a hug. I know you've probably long since forgotten about this story but just know that it brought me in and I was completely immersed in the world you created for hours. So, thank you.
rasheedah2907 chapter 24 . 1/4
Hey I know its been a really long time but do you think you'll finish this? Its an awesome story
Bk chapter 24 . 11/26/2017
So, this hasn’t been updated in almost 4 years and it’s completely heartbreaking. This story is such a great concept. I would love to see you finish it! Idk if you even still get your reviews or not but I had to leave this. I loved this when I followed you posting it and I still love it. If you ever finish it, I’ll be here. Waiting to read the end. In my head I picture how it goes, but there are so many ways it could happen... anyways, just wanted you to know, I still love it.
twilight-et-the-vampire chapter 24 . 11/12/2017
J'ai vraiment hâte de connaître le dénouement de cette histoire
annie.jo.marie chapter 24 . 11/11/2017
So... will the imprint break? Can’t Sam just tell him to remember? Isn’t the Imprint Bond supposed to be stronger than the Alpha Order? Could Bella be told? More soon please!
luminastra chapter 24 . 10/22/2017
I'm going to guess that since the last update was like 3 years ago that this won't be continued? Just wanted to leave a littletter review and let you know that people are still reading it and it rocks :) I hope one day you finish it.
Jen
Soledad Sanchez chapter 9 . 9/29/2017
the pattern ? I don't get it yet !
Born in 20th Century chapter 9 . 9/17/2017
I still haven't worked out the pattern :'00
Born in 20th Century chapter 7 . 9/17/2017
I'm rereading this and I'm not sure I get the pattern - why has Paul imprinted again just now and not earlier? I mean, between the moment he imprinted on Bella in the first chapter with sam telling him to forget about it and now, his imprinting again, he's had plenty of opportunities to see Bella and re imprint but why imprint again only just now and not earlier?
Born in 20th Century chapter 1 . 9/17/2017
You changed your author's username! Just wondering though are you going to continue this story? :D
Guest chapter 1 . 9/3/2017
Yes great story but Are you ever going to finish it? I would be nice if you could let the people who have enjoyed and also took the time to comment on your writing abilitys know weather or not you intend to finish it would only take a moment of your time to answer yes or no and would be the polite thing to do I really don't mean to sound rude but this is honestly the best one I've ever read not just attention to detail and clever writing and story skills but a genuine heart felt story with a decent plot line and no over the top bullshit it's honestly lovely a story I truly enjoyed and wish to see finished or at least know if it ever will be hands down best one I've read pls just take the time to let the fans know! XxX
g8rreader chapter 24 . 8/9/2017
I know its been a while but Ive got my fingers crossed you will be inspired to finish this! Such a great story:-)
g8rreader chapter 23 . 8/9/2017
Ive really enjoyed this story, like to the point of being obsessed! Couldn't walk away! I'm sad to only have one more chapter! Ive loved your other short stories about Paul and Bella, they would make great longer multi chapter reads. I was sad to see they'd been taken down, I really did enjoy them and I'm really picky!
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