|Reviews for Never On My Mind|
| Puella Pulchra chapter 10 . 7/8
"Because...because if Paul forgot his imprint on Bella again...who would keep her safe? That was his job. Who would pull her ass out of bed and throw her in the shower? Who would smack her out of a panic attack if necessary, or guilt her into eating? Those were his jobs."
I love this line. It's oddly sweet in a very Paul like way. Also is he forgetting that the previous times he forgot he was still making sure Bella was alright?
| Puella Pulchra chapter 21 . 7/7
I wish it could be as easy as Sam just Alpha ordering Paul to remember what he's forgotten, but then again messing with memory like that when it's what got them in trouble in the first place is probably not a good idea.
Then again... it has to better then a fight to the potential death.
| Puella Pulchra chapter 13 . 7/5
"He couldn't tell her how he'd gone into this thinking only of himself, of his pack, of preventing Leah 2.0. He couldn't tell her how he couldn't look at her now without seeing something else, something strong and defiant and...maybe a little crazy and desperate. Despite the...no,inspite of the crazy and desperate, Paul still thought there was something about Swan worth respecting."
The above line made me FEEL THINGS! I love it.
| Puella Pulchra chapter 24 . 6/27
Love this story. Paul being an Ass is great. The wolf taking over and trying to rip Sam aprt was unexpected but I loved it.
Understand if you've lost interest. But Paul eventually remembering the first time he imprinted would be so interesting.
| SavyGrace chapter 24 . 5/31/2022
This was such a good story and I really love your writing style. I hope you do finish this someday.
| Hanikka chapter 8 . 2/5/2022
What a delight it is to read well-written story. I wonder if you are writing your own original stories. I think you should and I would love to read them. You are awesome writer.
| Tanja83 chapter 24 . 1/21/2022
I hope you update soon, hope everything is okay in your life. This is a great story, you definitely have a way with words. Please update.
| Guest chapter 11 . 9/9/2021
The forgetting thing is both frustrating and funny. Kinda like seeing a very drunk person trying to get the key in the door and failing over and over.
| Louloute41 chapter 24 . 9/2/2021
Oh mn god, will there be a sequel? I can't stay hungry once again. I really liked your story from France, please tell me if I can have a sequel to the story without shaping it myself
| abaker9 chapter 24 . 7/9/2021
Will you ever update? I just found this story this morning and burned right through!
| Lullz93 chapter 24 . 6/18/2021
Yay, I'm review 3000! I loved this. I loved this Paul and I just really want to give him a hug. I wish there was more of an ending but at least this left me with the feeling that everything would work out. Thank you for writing this!
| Lullz93 chapter 10 . 6/18/2021
My thought was that he only imprinted when she smelled of fear but I haven't double checked that so I'm probably wrong XD
| Lullz93 chapter 3 . 6/17/2021
I read hit and run just before this. Ut seems like you have a talent for writing men with shitty attitudes. I love the snark, it's amazing XD
| Lullz93 chapter 1 . 6/17/2021
Oh I don't like this. I can already feel the heartache...
| Sandy2348 chapter 24 . 6/16/2021
This is such a. Good story! I hope we see more soon