|Reviews for Monster High OC|
| Guest chapter 7 . 1/27/2014
The story is great and the layout is perfect but you need to start writing longer chapters. That way you can expand more in your setting and story line.
| AgentWashington2.0 chapter 1 . 6/20/2013
Hey is there gonna be another chapter?!
| KingdomKeepersGirl chapter 2 . 5/12/2013
So, the Jackson Austin Moon person looks like Roxas or Ventus from KH? That's really cool!
| misguided.ghost777 chapter 57 . 12/29/2012
just as good the second time :3
| ana042000123 chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
esto es aburrido
| Catmandu22 chapter 3 . 11/6/2012
WOw, good story, LOTS OF GRAMMAR MISTAKES!
| misguided.ghost chapter 55 . 11/5/2012
Riven is the sex I swear
I love him!
I can just see him holding little baby letta.
| samanthatm chapter 54 . 10/29/2012
| misguided.ghost777 chapter 41 . 10/28/2012
not to be a stickler but its
my spell check always accidently changes it to toralie and it annoys the crape outta me.
I'm re reading every chapter and reviewing cause I didn't the first time.
I had forgot about blazes dreams.
| misguided.ghost.who.is.grounded.and.gets.an.hour.a.day.for.the.rest.of.the.week chapter 31 . 10/23/2012
lol clawd comments on their sex and riv says hes an annoying asshole
clawdeen comments and he blushes like she told him she liked him.
| ghostie chapter 54 . 10/18/2012
RIVEN! that kid is so fucking cute I swear!
and lol blaze when she was talking about khamen.
"I know he doesn't wear shirts but damn!"
lolololol. too fucking funny.
| Anony mouse101 chapter 54 . 10/18/2012
Awe! Such a sweet eding! Loved it!
| ghostie chapter 53 . 10/8/2012
riven- damn babe
lolololol. too funny.
love that khamen is just one of them now
| Anony mouse101 chapter 53 . 10/8/2012
Nice! Love the dressing up Niño as a girl! Priceless!
| misguided.ghost chapter 52 . 10/5/2012
dawwwwwwwwww rivens so protective
what song was she singing?
blaze- i have to go
blaze- clawds up