Reviews for Monster High OC
Guest chapter 7 . 1/27/2014
The story is great and the layout is perfect but you need to start writing longer chapters. That way you can expand more in your setting and story line.
AgentWashington2.0 chapter 1 . 6/20/2013
Hey is there gonna be another chapter?!
KingdomKeepersGirl chapter 2 . 5/12/2013
So, the Jackson Austin Moon person looks like Roxas or Ventus from KH? That's really cool!
misguided.ghost777 chapter 57 . 12/29/2012
just as good the second time :3
ana042000123 chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
esto es aburrido
Catmandu22 chapter 3 . 11/6/2012
WOw, good story, LOTS OF GRAMMAR MISTAKES!
misguided.ghost chapter 55 . 11/5/2012
Riven is the sex I swear
I love him!
I can just see him holding little baby letta.
samanthatm chapter 54 . 10/29/2012
awesome.
misguided.ghost777 chapter 41 . 10/28/2012
not to be a stickler but its
toralei.
my spell check always accidently changes it to toralie and it annoys the crape outta me.
I'm re reading every chapter and reviewing cause I didn't the first time.
I had forgot about blazes dreams.
misguided.ghost.who.is.grounded.and.gets.an.hour.a.day.for.the.rest.of.the.week chapter 31 . 10/23/2012
lol clawd comments on their sex and riv says hes an annoying asshole
clawdeen comments and he blushes like she told him she liked him.
ghostie chapter 54 . 10/18/2012
AWWWWWW
RIVEN! that kid is so fucking cute I swear!
and lol blaze when she was talking about khamen.

"I know he doesn't wear shirts but damn!"

lolololol. too fucking funny.
Anony mouse101 chapter 54 . 10/18/2012
Awe! Such a sweet eding! Loved it!
ghostie chapter 53 . 10/8/2012
riven- damn babe
lolololol. too funny.
love that khamen is just one of them now
Anony mouse101 chapter 53 . 10/8/2012
Nice! Love the dressing up NiƱo as a girl! Priceless!
misguided.ghost chapter 52 . 10/5/2012
dawwwwwwwwww rivens so protective
what song was she singing?
and hahahahah
blaze- i have to go
riven- why?
blaze- clawds up
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