Reviews for Finders, Keepers
Toothtooth chapter 1 . 1/25/2016
You write the best teenchester fanfcitions like I love he, so much
AmaraRae chapter 1 . 9/2/2015
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Aranna Undomiel chapter 1 . 2/3/2013
Loved this backstory for an ep I loved, but hated Dean in the end a bit for going against his brothers wishes... This gives a bit of insight into why he would do it...
TinTin11 chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
Lovely story!
ccase13 chapter 1 . 8/2/2012
I like how Amy was less good in this story. I thought the episode made Dean look somewhat unfair in not giving the girl a pass since she killed her mother to save Sam. Leaving the child alone and alive was bad tactics and kind of cruel.
sinsum chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
Really liked this AU. My favorite part is definitely when Dean says Sam is his and not anyone else's including John's coz, yeah that's 100% true. They kind of belong to each other (uh in a totally platonic way though) and that really rang true for me.
cappy712 chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
Very interesting story I liked the AU of the story, very nicely done. Thank you for sharing.
ifandomifeel chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
Another perfect story, right here! :) I love finding writers like you - it's super rare on to find someone that writes exactly what you like, and well, too. Seriously, you're very good.

Thanks for takin' the time to type this up - made my heart melt! 3
Girl-of-Geekery chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
Okay, it might make me sound a bit twisted, but I just LOVE stories like this - teenchester stories where Sammy gets hurt/in trouble/kidnapped and Dean has to come to his rescue. Gotta love big brother Dean. :P

This was such an amazing AU, I loved it. :)

Dean was in full big brother mode :D Those chicks should greatful Dean only killed them and didn't torture them or something first for hurting Sammy. You know he must have wanted to after they hurt him like that, led him to consider the kid might be dead, and had him tied up. Plus, after he found out Sam had yelled for him and he couldn't be there, that had to have killed him.

Wonderful story, I really, really loved this one! :D You had everyone pegged so well; great job!
Yellowbulma chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
So awesome! 3
zekeschance chapter 1 . 6/27/2012
Wow! A very good and detailed tag to GND. Loved how you gave us all 3 perspectives of this episode. John was very typical in getting aggravated with Sam and Dean was spot on in making sure little brother was okay before they left. Really liked this version of Dean killing Amy's mom and saving Sam. And of course the way you have Dean take care of Sam is always perfect! Great job and thanks so much!
ILETUDRIVE chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
I guess what drew me to this story (besides it being by you) was the line:

Dean arched an eyebrow; not in the mood to play Finders, Keepers with his brother. Because Sam belonged to him – not to anyone else...not even to John – and Dean intended to find the kid...and to then kick the ass of whoever had taken him.

In essence, especially in the early years this is accurate, Sam was and will always be Dean's on some basic level. No matter how far they stray they will always belong to the other.

Stephanie
KKBELVIS chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
YOu wrote: .but his brother was a teenager now and did weird shit all the time.

LOL...Dean would think that.

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YOu wrote: No 'probably', sweetheart," Dean corrected. "Definitely. I am definitely gonna kill you and your bitch mother for taking my brother."

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Badass Dean rocks my world!

And this: Without a word, Dean shrugged out of his leather jacket; switching the knife from one hand to the other as he did so and being careful not to jostle Sam.

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Badass one second...big bro the next. Love that!

I really thought the use of the Inari added in was a nice bonus twist.

This was fun!

Thank you for sharing your talent!

Karen
Fuzzball457 chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
Well I’m always game for AU episode twist with Limp!Sam. In fact it drives me crazy when they set it up for Sam to be hurt or he is hurt and then they brush over it (like the episode with Adam and the ghouls how they nearly killed Sam and he’s fine in the next shot) So this addition was quite a nice read.

Really liked the dynamics in this story, they were portrayed very well, especially John how he started angry then got a little concerned but still angry and so on. And I totally loved that even though John is obviously more experienced, Dean took the older Kitsune while John took the younger because that’s where Sam was. And Sam being so worried about Amy being killed was very true to the story.

“Because Sam belonged to him – not to anyone else...not even to John – and Dean intended to find the kid...and to then kick the ass of whoever had taken him” So very perfectly wraps it all up :)
Jane88 chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
Great "what if...", would have made a nice episode. I'm glad John was too late for Amy, I like the girl and she was innocent after all. And Dean was lovely as always, caring and protective. :) Another fabulous story!
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