|Reviews for Lightning Bolt Scars Need Healing|
| Yr chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
| Sheya chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
So far your story is interesting... you could stand to loose the ANs in the body of the chapter, since it kills the flow. ANs at the bottom no matter how long as long as they are shorter then the story are fine...
As for FFN taking down Mature and NC17 and graphic sex fics... well since the RULES for SEVERAL YEARS have stated that those stories are not acceptable, and AFFN was created for them, and Mediaminer never had such rules, I for one am GLAD that FFN is starting to enforce the rules. They SHOULD have been enforcing them from day one. You really can't complain if the rules that are being broken are now being enforced. FFN has been Lenient for several years hoping for authors to follow the rules, that they are fed up and enforcing them means they are, Finally, doing their jobs.
BTW since the second chapter is not a chapter you should take it down.
| Twilightfans chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
This is really good hun, please update soon.