Reviews for When It Alteration Finds
CheapNovelty chapter 7 . 1/13/2013
Really love what you've got going on so far, very to the point but the word choices and metaphors add so much detail that you don't need a lot of words. I love your portrayal of Eli here, more what I pictured after their breakup than what we got in the show, or at least a more in depth version. Really liked the bit about Clare's interactions with Cece and Bullfrog, oh and how he called her Clare, well done. Glad you'll be updating more, I'm digging the story and can't wait to see where you'll take it next.
Jordanxx chapter 7 . 1/13/2013
I really like this story so far. Keep it up!
xXxThe Phantom's RosexXx chapter 5 . 9/26/2012
Okay. Now I'm crying. When Eli said "I just hoped you still saw the human that's in there too" I was tearing up. What a huge misunderstanding! They need to talk things out and figure their stuff out. There's so much tension there that it's unbelievable. I am so sad that this is the last chapter you have posted as of now - I want more! You are an excellent writer and I hope you keep up the fantastic work, and that you update soon! I can't wait to read more :)
xXxThe Phantom's RosexXx chapter 4 . 9/26/2012
Love it! I love how Clare was so worried about getting in the car with him and all the thoughts and emotions and then the emotions that came when she thought back to Bullfrog and Cece. And Eli's banter about his driving. Excellent!
xXxThe Phantom's RosexXx chapter 3 . 9/26/2012
Once again, another perfect chapter from you! Aww - they're talking now! I love what he said at the end, how you narrated that Clare should have stayed on the floor. Seriously, your writing is superb! Impressive! :)
xXxThe Phantom's RosexXx chapter 2 . 9/26/2012
You capture emotion so well. Ugh they need to talk things out! But you write the tension between them so well. I love Munro's bug-eyed look he makes and I am glad you included Eli doing that in this story. His little noises were...adorable in a weird way? He's fighting so hard with his feelings. Can't wait to read the next chapter! This is sooo good!
xXxThe Phantom's RosexXx chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
Just stumbled upon it and I love it. You capture the emotion beautifully. I love this! On to read Chapter 2!
The Joker's Ears and Eyes chapter 5 . 9/26/2012
:) You have a way with words.
The Joker's Ears and Eyes chapter 4 . 8/21/2012
waump! This is awesome. I like it!
Guest chapter 4 . 8/20/2012
I don't understand the title. Was it a typo? It doesn't make sense to me.
AfewSentencesShortOfaParagraph chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
I really like this concept-Eli and Clare being forced back together before either of them are ready. This was a short chapter, but you've already set up an amazing premise. I am intrigued by Eli's stoic behavior, and I want to dive deeper into Clare's brain. I feel like this could be comically unhealthy for the both of them, but I'm optimistic they'll work it out.

I've always kinda wondered what it would be like on the show if there was no way for these two to escape each other.

I liked Clare's thoughts about Adam. They were the only semi-lighthearted thing about this chapter, and I'm already looking forward to the misfits interaction.

Nice choice of sonnet. You're perfect, love you, don't change.
Degrassistar chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
Please continue!:)