|Reviews for XME: Operation Mutant Registration|
| Sexxy Malfoy chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
| gordhanx chapter 3 . 8/1/2012
Real (human) name: Austin Dooney.
Gender Male or Female: Male.
Mutant name: Slow Mo.
Age 13-25: 25.
Appearance (hair, eyes, height, general physical features, including physical mutations): Black Hair, Blue Eyes, 7'1ft, Caucasian Skin, Lean build.
Personality description (be detailed): Having been disowned by his family and left homeless, Austin has developed a very self-sufficient and rather vulnerable nature. His entire life revolved around keeping himself safe. He is a bit resistant to accepting help, having already been to many shelters where he received little to no help. But he will do none the less.
Powers: He can slow down time.
Power discovery (how'd they find out, what happened?): He was running from some cops, when suddenly everything began to move slower than him, and it was then he realized his power.
Family?: A mother named Felica, and Father named Zack.
Feelings on humans: He's ok with must of them.
Are you the founder of the Sanctuary yes or no question: Yes.
Crime or crimes committed: Stealing.
Criminal History detailed account of your crimes: Theft, Robbery.
History normal family history: At the age of 6, he was abandoned by his parents. He went to several shelters to try and turn his life around and find work. However, having never graduated high school did not present many opportunities for him. He was able to find a job as a waiter, but after paying the rent on his apartment, he could barely afford food or clothes for himself. This forced him to turn to a secret life of crime, adopting the alias, Slow mo shortly after discovering his power. He was smart enough to avoid high end stores and only struck smaller known stores with less security, only stealing from food and cheap clothing stores. He eventually founded the Sanctuary.
Leader or Follower: Leader.
Do they want to be a leader? Could they even lead? Yes, I'm sure he would able to lead.
Weapon of choice (besides their powers, what would they use?): a Katanna.
Uniform/mutant outfit description when fighting: White jeans, White Jacket, Black Boots, White Face Mask.
Would you ever leave the Sanctuary to join the X-Men Explain why? Yes or No question then explain why or why not. No, he is needed there.
Skills: Stealth, Fighting, Leading.
Likes: Chess, Guitar, Dogs, Doves.
Dislikes/hates: Racists, Senator Kelly, Double Crossers, Poker.
Good at: Chess, Guitar, Fighting, Leading.
Bad at: Poker, Ice Hockey, Singing, Dancing.
How do they like to spend their time? (hobbies): Playing Chess, Playing Guitar, Training.
Anything else? No
Can I PM you if need be? Yes.
Also when are you updating?
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/5/2012
Great story! I'm submitting a mutant :) I introduce you to Artemis Lenoxx.
Real (human) name: Artemis Lenoxx
Gender Male or Female: Female
Mutant name: Aqua
Age 13-25: 17
Appearance: She has ice blue eyes with layered red hair. Around 5'6". A lot like actress Haley Ramm.
Personality description: She is very reserved. Artemis prefers to think through situations rather than just charge straight in. Probably has one of the best pokerfaces you'd ever see. She doesn't show her emotions and isn't set off easily. The only people she could really confide in would be her fellow members of the Sanctuary.
Powers:She has control over all forms of water. She can freeze it and evaporate it. Artemis can will water to do practically anything. She can also force people to do her bidding by controlling their blood.
Power discovery: When she was 13, Artemis and her dad were at the beach when two boys wouldn't leave her alone. They kept splashing her and her powers caused the water to create a wave and sweep the boys out to sea. They were eventually rescued, but Artemis and her dad were long gone.
Family: Her mom was a British girl named Sophia Jones living in America for two years. She met Ryan Lenoxx and they hit it off. They were never formally married and when Sophia's dad found out he took her back to the UK. She had Artemis there, but died in childbirth. One custody battle later and Artemis went to the USA with Ryan. Ryan was always someone who hated and feared mutants. When he discovered Artemis was one, he locked her in the basement to hide her from the world.
Feelings on humans: Indifferent. She understands why they are afraid of mutants, but that doesn't mean she likes it.
Are you the founder of the Sanctuary yes or no question: No
Fighter/pacifist: Depends on the situation. She won't help to start fights, but will help end them if necessary.
Crime or crimes committed: Disturbing the peace, Assault, Breaking and entering, Thievery
Criminal History detailed account of your crimes: To escape from her father, at age 15, she controlled his blood and forced him to let her out. Artemis took all the money he had in the house and a valuable necklace that had once been her mother's. She then took to the streets. To survive she had to break into houses and steal. Artemis would control the owner's blood then steal money and jewelry. She was caught at age 17 when she didn't realize that the owner of one house had dialed 911. Artemis allowed herself to be caught, but later controlled a guard to let her out of prison. She then ran to the Sanctuary.
History normal family history: She hates her father for what he did to her. Artemis wants him to suffer the way she did.
Leader or Follower: Mainly follower
Do they want to be a leader? Could they even lead?: She will lead when necessary, but prefers to give suggestions and have someone else figure out what to do with them.
Weapon of choice: Hand to hand combat. Think Scarlett Johansson in the Avengers hand to hand combat. Flips and kicks and all that.
Uniform/mutant outfit description when fighting: Once again think Scarlett Johansson Avengers. That type of uniform but in white and sea blue. Not as revealing though.
Would you ever leave the Sanctuary to join the X-Men Explain why? Yes or No question then explain why or why not: Yes, Artemis would only leave the Sanctuary if the X-Men could somehow help to erase her criminal past. She is ashamed of what she did to innocent people but not her father.
Skills: Gymnastics, intelligence, writing poetry(this is what she did in her years of solitude), and swimming.
Likes: The water, peaceful places, gymnastics,
Dislikes/hates: Her father, being in a large crowd, airplanes, heights, elevators, and cockiness.
Good at: Gymnastics, swimming, writing, and solving problems
Bad at: Giving speeches, trusting, and confrontations.
Hope I gave enough info :)
| ninjagirl77 chapter 2 . 7/6/2012
Ugh. I have to retype this whole thing because it didn't show up before. Here I go again. This is Artemis Lennox
Real (human) name: Artemis Lennox
Gender Male or Female: Female
Mutant name: Aqua
Age 13-25: 17
Appearance: Layered red hair with ice blue eyes. Around 5'6" Haley Ramm is a good reference.
Personality description: She is reserved. Artemis is the silent listener type. She likes to think over situations and develop a strategy rather than just rush into them. Artemis probably has one of the best pokerfaces you'd ever see. She is very good at hiding emotions. Artemis only confides in her best friend from the Sanctuary. (you can pick who from other submissions) She would rather walk away from conflict then continue fighting.
Powers: She has control over water. She can move it, freeze it, and evaporate it. Since blood is mostly water, she can control people's bodies by controlling their blood.
Power discovery: When she was 13, she and her father were at the beach and two boys wouldn't leave her alone. Her powers caused a giant wave to sweep them out to sea. They were later rescued, but Artemis and her father were long gone.
Family: A British mom named Sophia Turner who was living in America for a couple years with her family. She met Ryan Lennox and they hit it off. They were never formally married and when Sophia's father found out she was pregnant he took her back to the UK. Sophia died in childbirth and one custody battle later Artemis was with Ryan. Ryan was a man who feared and hated mutants. When he found out Artemis was one, he locked her in the basement so she woulnd be hidden from the world. Artemis escaped when she controlled her father's blood(this is how she developed the skill) and forced him to release her. She was 15 then. She stole all the money that was in the house and some valuable jewelry. Artemis then went on the run.
Feelings on humans: She understands why they fear mutants, but hates the oppression. Artemis just wishes they would somehow understand and leave mutants alone.
Are you the founder of the Sanctuary yes or no question: No.
Fighter/pacifist: Depends on the situation. She will not start a fight unless extremely provoked(like if people mention her criminal past or father), but will help to stop one if neccessary.
Crime or crimes committed: Disturbing the peace, breaking and entering, assault, thievery
Criminal History detailed account of your crimes: While on the run, she had to break into people's homes in order to steal to survive. She would control the owners into letting her in then steal food, supplies, clothes, and money. Artemis was caught when a child in one of the houses she was robbing called 911. She hadn't realized the child was there. Artemis was arrested, but later escaped prison by controlling a guard to let her out. She then ran to the Sanctuary.
History normal family history: She hates her father and wants revenge on what he did to her. Artemis wants him to suffer for what he did to her.
Leader or Follower: Mainly a follower. She gives suggestions to the leader, but lets them figure out what to do with it.
Do they want to be a leader? Could they even lead?: Artemis would lead if neccessary, but would be uncomfortable in the position of authority.
Weapon of choice: Think Scarlett Johansson in the Avengers type hand to hand combat. Kicks and flips and all that.
Uniform/mutant outfit description when fighting: A form fitting blue and white leather suit. Once again think Scarlett Johansson. Not as revealing though.
Would you ever leave the Sanctuary to join the X-Men Explain why? Yes or No question then explain why or why not: Yes, she would join the X-Men if they could somehow help to make people forgive and forget what she did to them. Also, if he Sanctuary best friend went to the X-Men she would follow.
Skills:Gymnastics, swimming, writing poetry(that's what she did those 2 years locked up), and problem solving.
Likes: Peaceful open places, the water, gymnastics, poetry, italian food, the color blue, listening to music, and swimming.
Dislikes/hates: Small dark places, elevators, her father, airplanes, and being in a big crowd of people
Good at: Gymnastics, writing poetry, problem solving, planning a strategy,
Bad at: Giving speeches, trusting, confrontations, and just goofing around and having fun.
How do they like to spend their time? (hobbies): Writing poetry while outside by a body of water.
Anything else: That's pretty much it :)
Can I PM you if need be: Sorry, no. I don't know you in real life.
| ninjagirl77 chapter 3 . 7/5/2012
Okay, I'm the Guest that submitted Artemis Lennox(if she showed up) I just made an account and I realized that I forgot to put:
How do they like to spend their time? (hobbies): Writing poetry and swimming
Anything else: That's pretty much it :)
Can I PM you if need be: I don't know you in real life, so no. Sorry.
| ninjagirl77 chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
Great story! Update soon!
| ANGELnDEVIL chapter 2 . 7/3/2012
| El' Caliente chapter 2 . 7/3/2012
That was awsome sooo worth the wait!
| Pink Punk Princess27 chapter 2 . 6/30/2012
| Bobmararocks chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
Luv it specilly the go cart part. So funny. Thx for using Destiny Peace. Luv the story so far and cant wait to read more. Soz but i'm not sure about princles or nurses/doctors. Also what is a principle? Is it like a head teacher cuz that's what they're called over here in England. So plz tell me if they're the same. If so i'll try to write about one for ya.
| Anonymus Girl chapter 2 . 6/24/2012
Principal Adarius Calvan
he is a large black bald man very tall muscual and intimodating he has one eye and the other is MIA he wears a eye patch with a long jagged scar from cheek to skull patch but looks are truely decieving with him he is the nicest most gentleist man you will ever meet a philosipher by heart wise and peaceful he enjos time with the students he treats them all the same he is softspoken and polite he has surved his country!(he lost one eye/ and his left arm he has a metel arm)
6feet7 tall very muscular!
He is about 59 years old he is married to the same girl since he was 18 he has three daughters Amii 31 Peta 25 and Gayle 20 all are doing very will with themselves!
| SawyerHawkGirl chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
| out4thecount chapter 2 . 6/24/2012
The Male Doctor:
Anthony Lovejoy the fifth
Intelligent, very socially awkward and rigidly logical. very high IQ often seems to have created a high superiority complex, but he also posses childlike qualities, of which he seems unaware, such as extreme stubbornness. he is very logical. He possesses an photograpbic and eidetic memory and an IQ of 185,has claimed to have 2 Master's Degree and two doctoral degrees before he was even 23,Despite his intelligence, his eccentricities, direct remarks, and demanding nature put him at odds with everyone, he is often baffled by common social interactions. He fails to understand the simplest sarcastic jokes he no interest in religion. He tends to ignore or express dislike for religious celebrations such as Christmas, and hastens to bring up the pagan origins to each festival he is a good looking man just way too socialy akward he is a big germaphobe! he is a akward hunk of a man! he is bisexual but way in the closit! he has a big ego and loves to brag about him being a doctor! he does not like woman telling him he is wrone he was broght up wit a strict dominate father and a overprotective sumbissive housewife mother! he doenst have much expierienc with kids they scare the heck out of him! he is a clean man!
Apperence: He stands a good 6 ft3 well toned dark enriching brown eyes, with messy dark brown hair! with thin rimmed glasses!
He was a genuois child a prodigy he was soo smart he started high school at 10 graduated and went to collage at 14!
Um not sure if you want him to have powers or not?
| gordhanx chapter 2 . 6/24/2012
Here's my principle: Arron Freeman. He's human, and he alot like G. Gordon Godfrey from young justice invasion.
For a nurse and doctor: we have Abigail and Bruce. They decided to work at the institute because they wanted to help mutants. And they did know it was a mutant school.
| Pink Punk Princess27 chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
YES! UPDATE SOON!