Reviews for The love story continues
tonye chapter 12 . 7/27/2014
Well I kindda think u should look at your spelling otherwise I enjoyed it well done!
Guest chapter 6 . 12/15/2013
Gorgeous. I love it
sudamericanfangirl chapter 12 . 9/26/2013
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LittleMissDramione chapter 12 . 6/16/2013
When did she become pregnant? I never once read in this story about a sex scene. So can you explain this please. One cannot simply just become pregnant.
Edward Cullen's Twin Is Mine chapter 3 . 6/5/2013
I hope this continues to be a fluffy story... cute )
Edward Cullen's Twin Is Mine chapter 2 . 6/5/2013
Hey, I really like the fact that you're continuing from where it left off. However, the grammar and spelling errors do distract me a bit from the reading. If you need help with editing, I can help ) Now, I'm off to continue reading the rest of the story..
pandabear34 chapter 12 . 12/24/2012
You should keep going it is amazing:) I want to hear more about the kid!
FallenFan77 chapter 12 . 10/10/2012
Amazing story and you may already know I'm a huge fan of fallen based on my name (duh) but anyways this was really good but you need to work on your grammar. fallen
Guest chapter 4 . 9/20/2012
that was fast! whoah slow down
Fables-and-FairyTale chapter 1 . 8/14/2012
Oh my god! Read your summary, I was gonna do a story like this, I don't know how different my ideas would be though as I can't read the first chapter because it's late at night! But I MUST read this story! Bet it'll be great! :D
samcheese1 chapter 12 . 7/21/2012
A great story. But you need to remember your punctuation and grammar. I didn't see much in here and it was hard to read.
vgabz chapter 10 . 7/8/2012
This was all very good and intense, I think you should continue:) If only this really happened in the books ha.
Guest chapter 9 . 7/6/2012
noooooooooooooooooooo! continue it pleeeeese! there are so few storys on fanfiction about fallen and this is soooooo goooood! please please continue! i love it, from annalise
Guest chapter 5 . 7/6/2012
heey i was the geust who commentedbefore... each chapter gets better! please continuethe story! 3 from annalise xx
Guest chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
i love rapture so much but was soo sad at the end that it was the finish of their love story im so glad you wrote this to continue it 3 thanks!
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