|Reviews for The Oncoming Storm|
| ikusatsunagi chapter 8 . 10/21/2017
holy shit this is awesome, will you continue?
| Ryoji Mochizuki chapter 8 . 7/21/2017
| ARSLOTHES chapter 8 . 4/25/2017
Hope you update this soon, love how you incorporated fate stay night
| Lovnag chapter 8 . 1/30/2017
This is a good work, but not really one I enjoyed that much. It is noticably darker not only in terms of the character of Negi, but in everything else too. It really just pains me to see what I thought to be one of the best parts in the manga completely removed from it.
| Newbie1104 chapter 8 . 7/21/2016
You're an amazing writer. Too bad it seems like you've given up on writing. A shame indeed.
| Mernom chapter 7 . 7/19/2016
Rin Tosaka? Unless I'm wrong with my recognition, that's her. And the walk with death thing supports that hypothesis.
| Mernom chapter 5 . 7/19/2016
Minor deviations, nothing big, but it makes more sense for Negi to move out. It IS a girl's room, after all. Rather interesting chapter overall, and it seems that the good stuff is about to come! Also, your disclaimers are way too long.
| Mernom chapter 3 . 7/19/2016
So far it's virtually the same as the Canon, except maybe character interactions.
| Mernom chapter 1 . 7/19/2016
Sounds interesting so far, let's see what else you have!
| fyphoniex chapter 8 . 8/10/2015
Oh my gosh I feel like I watching the anime but it's better than the anime! I know it's been a while and you may or may not still be continuing this but please please pelase update I really love this story it's probably the best negima fanfiction I've come across so please make another chapter
| sierra.steinbrecher chapter 7 . 2/4/2015
Every single part of this chapter was drop dead amazing, like the way they slowly uncovered the truth and only at the very end understood. Negi's testament was very well done.
| sierra.steinbrecher chapter 6 . 2/4/2015
I absolutely loved how sharp Negi was in this chapter, in his humor, intellect, anger at his father, and decisive statements. And that moniker is perfect for him.
| sierra.steinbrecher chapter 1 . 2/3/2015
Will we still get the same girls in his class, with the time difference? I hope so.
| Zege chapter 8 . 12/12/2014
I just marathoned the whole story so far in one sitting, and now I'm starving for more.
I beg of you to pick this story back up.
| Selias chapter 8 . 11/23/2014
Too bad this has been abandoned, because it's a really cool story.