Reviews for Cracks
YuniX-2 chapter 1 . 6/27/2012
Well, even though I had to copy and paste this into word, and then use the 'replace' function to turn the japanese names into the american ones just so that I could read this without envisioning Satoshi of Higurashi No Naku Koro Ni (who is calm and sweet, and nothing like Ash) every time I read Satoshi, this is a wonderful little fic. Very sweet.
AAML 4ever 123 chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
GREAT JOB! I loved the use of description and awww Ashy boy is helping Misty.
OnlyHurtInside chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
I LOVE IT :D I THINK I HAVE READ OVER LIKE 90000000 STORIES BY YOU, THEY ARE ALLLLLL AMAZING XD
Mewsea chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
Wow, you wrote this story so good! It was really cute! Good job! :)
Poke Complex chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
Interesting! Sooo Cute! LUVED IT!
Auramaster24 chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
Thanks 4 the dedication. It made my day. This was a great one shot. Maybe next you can try a family Ash and Misty one shot. Ash and Misty 4ever.
Pokeshipper chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
Excellent descriptive piece. However, I think Ash's personality seemed faintly out of character. Misty was right out, despite maybe the weaker act.