Reviews for Assertive
kazune1988 chapter 1 . 9/22/2015
Didn't quite expect Miles to be the one doing the ogling. He hardly seem to be the sort but oh well, what's a man without his hobby, right?
Supernatural Princess14 chapter 1 . 7/11/2015
Very good story! It made me smile and if I was the cook I would be drooling too.
edgeworth's ass chapter 1 . 6/28/2015
okay just kidding i really wanted to use that username i couldn't help myself this was too cute
LadyTeldra chapter 1 . 3/14/2015
-Falls over giggling-
Alright, so I actually know nothing of the fandom beyond what I read from wikis... and of course what the characters look like.
I do believe you made me fall in love with this pairing though.
librarat chapter 1 . 11/24/2014
I am surprised that no one managed to jump Edgeworth in the diner. Oh my, I just love this pairing!
kurobizzle chapter 1 . 11/14/2014
You have no idea how much I enjoyed this. I don't always review a story but when I do, I'm crying tears of joy. This was fantastic, great work!
w- easy enough chapter 1 . 6/11/2014
Hahaha! Nice. Go Edgeworth!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/8/2014
No words can describe how amazing and well written that was...
Leiya chapter 1 . 11/6/2013
OMG I really enjoyed this piece of work! Thank you for this great fanfiction!
I like the assumption that Edgey might be asexual although in this case he'd proven it wrong And I enjoyed the way their confession went. This calm non-dramatic way suits them way better than overexcited ways and instant sex in my opinion. Things like this can happen later.

So again, thank you for this great fanfiction!
6GunSally chapter 1 . 6/28/2013
...I can narrate a scenario for you.


This was awesome! Thanks!
andysanime chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
Really good job on this... ha-ha I kinda feel bad about how embaressed they were at the diner but only 'kinda' XD.
cyberbubble99 chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
eeeeeeee it's so cute! *A* I love how you portrayed each of their personalities! A wonderful job
FanFiker-FanFinal chapter 1 . 2/11/2013
Kissing in a public place is not a sin at all, it makes things clear.

Good way of Phoenix dubting about his feelings. Doesn't know how to manage them, not like Edgeworth, who looks like he does perfectly.

Thanks for writing.
Sellym chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
I just happened to stumble across this ff and... wow! Respect.
I wasted so much time already reading random slash-ffs in my life ;)

It always makes me happy to find a well-written one among these.
And even among the few ffs building up tension, making you read the whole text once you started, the least stories actually keep the original chara's personalities.

As I skimmed through the other reviews, I know I'm not telling you anything new, but I definitely had to write a comment on this and a comment on this couldn't do without what I wrote up 'til now.

So... Actually I guess, I'm here to say "thanks"...
Thank you for posting this story, giving me the chance to read it.
Tree Flower chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
Perfect story
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