Reviews for Trial and Error
Lady Death 16 chapter 1 . 4/23/2013
Dzuljeta chapter 1 . 7/13/2012
You did a great job in describing everything! I almost felt as if I was there. Creepy. Amazingly written.
Shakespeare's Lemonade chapter 1 . 7/11/2012
Interesting story. I like the voice of the character, and you did a good job with first person. One thing you might avoid in the future is using sound effects in quotation marks. Mostly, they should just be italicized.
Whiitewolf chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
This is awesome. Just plain old awesome. Throw in some fantastic and fabulous as well. Okay, okay throw in some epicness and terrificness, too.

I guess what I'm trying to say, is this was really well done! And you get bonus points for posting it on the 23rd. Have a cookie. You've earned it!