|Reviews for Breath of Life|
| MasterYewtthax chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
This is like a exerpt from a novelization...good.
| DIVIDED-LEGION chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
First off, thank you for the review on my story!
Secondly, I enjoyed the look you've given us on this part of the movie. I honestly felt cheated with the ending of the movie and the final battle between Ravenna and Snow. I enjoyed the internal reflection leading up to the fight, I think that Snow definitely had more reservations about actually fighting than the movie (and perhaps) portrayed.
On critical note (it's just a habit ;)), I tend to find myself annoyed when lyrics break up paragraphs of a story. It disrupts the natural flow -at least that is my take on it.
Other than that, a very nice one-shot, I'm glad I came over and read this :)