Reviews for Suspension
M3dD1jAd3 chapter 1 . 10/4/2014
Either do a sequel or add more chapters.
Btw I really liked it.
Purple1999 chapter 1 . 5/14/2014
What happened :0
mousanony chapter 1 . 6/20/2013
This is just incredible! I was drawn in from the first line, laughed about the whole elopement thing, and then had it all stolen out from under me in the end. Just... shocking and the very last exchange just kills me, 'cause it's pulled away from them too, and it's sudden and brutal and they have no control.
So well done!
JustGrace13 chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
Another wonderful job :)
Guest chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
There had better be a sequel to this!
TivaGirl chapter 1 . 11/21/2012
Noo! That can't be it! Add more pleeeeaaasssseeee!
firstadream100 chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
Why? Why? Why!? Why the helo would you do that! Just so you know you are capa le of killing me with 6 words...
ZolaZoey chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
Love it! Write more!
Jena Rink chapter 1 . 8/28/2012
I signed in, which I never do, to post a story and tell you that this is amazing. Please post more! :)
Christinou chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
good, emotional, good, etc...
:)
superfluouslyme chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
You are pure evil! I love it!
dopeskii chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
how about a nice little follow up for this story... I just need to know what happens
Guest chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
great piece of writing! It made me want to cry. . .
Sampson1 chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
You have to continue, can't just end it there! Great story.
ajc03 chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
Oh wow really good story. I love it from start to end ! And what end !

Is there going to be another chapter ? Because I really don't want that elevator to fall and crash !
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