Reviews for Working Vacation
Shepard131 chapter 4 . 9/21
you should write more
Guest chapter 4 . 7/3
This was great, wish there was more of it!
erik chapter 4 . 3/26
A great sense of playfulness and I hope to see it continued.
Guest chapter 2 . 2/14
Atlantis in the movies
The Atlanteans are now fish tailed under water,but turned into legs once on land.
They are vegetarians,due to the fact that eating meat is considered eating your own friends in the Atlantean empire.
The nobles,wealthy and royals have a grown up symbol. When they turn 16, their tails will be clipped with oysters in various even numbers. 12 meant the absolute ruler of the Sea people
Their clothing is inspired from Egyptian,Greek,Arabic and Chinese. They'll speak the language created for Disney's Atlantis:the Lost City
Their society rpoots on science and arts. Oh,and they're also extremely pofound singers. Not only that,they can even automatically produce a musical number without further preparation at parties.
Their hatred on ocean junkwas so intense,that they actually flooded the bay city where most of the ocean junk was produced!
eilidhdawn chapter 4 . 8/30/2015
This is awesome, hope you finish it
Esmeraude11 chapter 4 . 8/2/2015
Oh my god Tony you've just declared war against Mckay.
redbanker chapter 4 . 7/26/2015
OMG! This story is so great all the characters are perfect. I so hope you will write more.
JoWashington chapter 4 . 5/25/2015
I would have NEVER even dreamed of this possibility!
This is awesome!
I know that you have it down as a complete story, but I TOTALLY see the individual chapters/ story-plots and I provide immense applause to you!
If you've got them- I would love to read your future chapters! Especially in regard to this story!
Great work!
Sailor Pandabear chapter 4 . 5/25/2015
Nekogami Bastet chapter 4 . 5/20/2015
Fun, very fun, I love it
Guest chapter 4 . 1/7/2015
Nice dynamics, and quite a fun read.
Luna Fl chapter 4 . 12/20/2014
I love it, I love it, I love it! I can't wait for the next chapter. JARVIS and Atlantis, their digital love gives me fuzzy feelings :D I wonder how long Shepherd let's them muddle on or how long it takes for the Avengers to find out through various hinkeys. Can't wait!
Guest chapter 4 . 10/6/2014
hellsbells101 chapter 4 . 8/15/2014
I love all of this and the teams POV's about Sheppard. And go JARVIS!
janelouise chapter 1 . 7/15/2014
I love how you show our heroes from other POVs...and how their badassness holds up to the scrutiny of other heroes! Love seeing John in his "There's nothing I haven't done and it was no big deal" -personae! I've found a goldmine in your stories! -Jane
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