Reviews for Do Not Cross
2loveybunnies chapter 1 . 12/12/2012
Please write more of this one...I know you have a lot on your plate, but I would love to see it continued!
roxnroll chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
I finally got a chance to sit down and read this and I have to say that I hope you continue this! This was one of the most interesting things I've read.
I really look forward to more!
Rox
Katy chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
I really like this story line. I really want to know what happens with the shooter.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
I love detective Edwards.. even if he's technically Lieutenant Edward...yum.. can't wait to see your novella!
MadisonJean9 chapter 1 . 9/30/2012
More please! :)
Darling Cullen chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
This is a very good beginning, I loved reading it. This killer seems so interesting. I'm soo waiting for the sequel
Anita chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
Wow, this was a great beginning. As good as anything by Raymond Chandler. I do hope you will continue it - I want to see that killer caught. Thank you.
Daggers4U chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
Ohhhh me likey! I'm very intregued & dying for more!
allrain chapter 1 . 8/26/2012
please continue this story,it's great.i really enjoy your writing,thanks
SeekingJamestown chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
I want more! Please!
Mystik Angel 85 chapter 1 . 8/12/2012
I loved this the first time i read it as part of the Driven to Desire Challenge and I loved it this time. Please continue... Desperately wanting to know what happens at the end...
kaljan02 chapter 1 . 7/19/2012
Love this! Can't wait to read more!
vivalarye chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
Wow! Love this already, can't wait for more
littlelizruth chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
i found you! i loved this story! :D
Guest chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
love it - more please!
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