|Reviews for Do Not Cross|
| ladytwi30 chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
im loving this story esp the dispoal of jessica
| adricastro chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
Wow! This has like the right amount of everything: angst, love, action, mystery, lust...Wow...so well written too! I'm sooooo intrigued! Literally can't wait to see where you take this! ;) ;)
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
please update soon!
| llabelle chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
I really enjoyed this and can't wait to read more!
| Soni's Angel chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
Hi AG1981! Loved this o/s and am so happy that you intend expanding it in to a shortish novella. I would love to see them resolve their issues and have a HEA! and also to get the bad guy of-course;P Thanks for sharing, I always love reading stories from you;)
| prettymomma128 chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
I really like this story so far and I would love to read more about them. Esp for them to catch the bad guy. Great job so far! :)
| GreenEyedLove06 chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
Love this so far
| Melany333 chapter 1 . 6/27/2012
love it, can't wait for more or them and the chase of the bad guy
| elliott75 chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
I can't wait to read the continuation of this story!
| twimomof6 chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
oh my, good gravy! I think I lost my mind at the beginning. I honestly thought that it was Edward that had gotten taken out. Scared me for a little bit. Kinda glad that we don't have to deal with Mike on this one. Sorry for what happened, Jessica seems to be a real bitch about the way things weren't resolved between these two.
(in a deep southern twang) Do your thang honey babe.
| HockeyChick10 chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
Holy fuck! What a way to start a story! You win at life!
| amwine chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
Wow, what a great story! Congratulations! I am looking forward to them taking this guy down once and for all. Great job...thanks!
| datwood chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
I love this story already! This first chapter was incredible! I can't wait to read more of this!
| regina423 chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
LOVE IT! Please keep writing.
| Canyaceme chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
Oh, you have to extend this story! We have to know who the murderer is! Please, with a cherry and whipped cream on top?
P.S. you can use the cherry and whipped cream any way you choose ;)