Reviews for Do Not Cross
cullengirl08 chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
I really like the story and look forward to reading more of it...
AngelicAmanda chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
Good Chapter...
WiltshireGlo chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
Oh my goodness, I loved the characters, the mystery, the reunion. Can't wait to see what happens- trying to work out the sniper's motivations. I'm Glad Edward told Jessica they were over. Thanks for a great chapter
twilightobsessed40873a chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
I love it.
jewles622 chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
Love live love love lovvvveeee... I can't wait for more!
stormy315 chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
awesome...this is really promising...cant wait to see what happens next...
tff000 chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
really enjoying this story so far. a little confused - did he officially break up with jess in his office. thinking yes but just wanted to make sure
baseballshoppingmomma chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
Excited about the next chapter. Hoping to see Bella and Jessica have it out!
Rebadams7 chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
Brilliant. Steamy. A little film noir and a little crimsl minds

Me Likey!

More si voussoirs plait

Bakergirl101 chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
Please continue this story. I can't wait to read what happens next.
GorGirl chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
I really hope you continue this, and let them catch the killer. It reminds me of old film noir, even though it's set in modern times. I'm glad Jessica was nipped right off the bat.
Catie Jane chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
love it
bearygirl chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
Cant wait to read more. chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
Copward any heroward really is amazing. Update soon pleese love it so far. But I've fallen for almost every single one of your stories.
mugglemom08 chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
Fabulous! Can't wait to read the rest!
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