|Reviews for Do Not Cross|
| jewles622 chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
Love live love love lovvvveeee... I can't wait for more!
| stormy315 chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
awesome...this is really promising...cant wait to see what happens next...
| tff000 chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
really enjoying this story so far. a little confused - did he officially break up with jess in his office. thinking yes but just wanted to make sure
| baseballshoppingmomma chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
Excited about the next chapter. Hoping to see Bella and Jessica have it out!
| Rebadams7 chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
Brilliant. Steamy. A little film noir and a little crimsl minds
More si voussoirs plait
| Bakergirl101 chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
Please continue this story. I can't wait to read what happens next.
| GorGirl chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
I really hope you continue this, and let them catch the killer. It reminds me of old film noir, even though it's set in modern times. I'm glad Jessica was nipped right off the bat.
| Catie Jane chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
| bearygirl chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
Cant wait to read more.
| karlee.is.number.1 chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
Copward any heroward really is amazing. Update soon pleese love it so far. But I've fallen for almost every single one of your stories.
| mugglemom08 chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
Fabulous! Can't wait to read the rest!
| kuntrygal chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
Love it! Copward is always a good one!
| jess1477jf chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
Loved it and can't wait for more. Please update soon!
| shayna.lane chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
So glad your continuing this this was one of my FACS in the contest so claps too you for placing high can't wait to see how you resolve everything!
| Love M Go Blue chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
Not that we can ever ask him cuz, you know, he's dead - but I wonder why Mike would think that it was Bella who'd texted him. After all, since they were dating-ish, Mike would've had Bella's cell phone number, right, and likely programmed into his phone? So when the text came through telling him to meet her in Queens from a number that didn't match Bella's, wouldn't he have thought that was . . . strange?