|Reviews for No Regrets|
| ASuDC chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
Hooray! You have written something new about Alan and Denny ;-)
Unfortunately...I didn’t know the movie at all...so I have no Idea, what “the Cranes” are talking about. ;-(
But I’m pretty sure it must be funny...since all of your Alan and Denny conversations are very amusing. ;-)
So, thank you for this little story anyway...please keep going. ;-)))
| L J Groundwater chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
I like it. Always like the little snappy dialogue between them, and you always capture it well.
Thanks for sharing it!
FYI, just a tiny gramattical thing, but I notice you have done it on other stories (sorry, I was an English major, feel free to smack me)... when you use "but" or "and" or "or", you need to put the comma BEFORE the conjunction, not after it.
So, in this case, "was in love with Clint Eastwood's but, chose to stay with her husband" would become "Clint Eastwood's, but chose to stay..."
Sorry, couldn't help it... it's a small thing but as an English major it was making me nutty, lol!
Please continue these lovely little pieces!
| MLaw chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
This was very clever. I like the comparisons to the Clint Eastwood movie.