|Reviews for For One, For None|
| spoilerlover chapter 8 . 2/20
I love this story! This is actually better than Mulan 2!
Anyway, I have a few questions...
In the first chapter, you stated that it has been a year since Mulan came home from the fight against Shan-Yu but then in the chapter where Mulan and Shang talked to the emperor, you said that it has only been a month. I'm confused.
But it would be better for the story if you stick with the one year gap instead of just a month. That way, Shang and Mulan's relationship wouldn't feel rushed. That's actually one of the things in Mulan 2 that irked me. Shang thought Mulan was a man for the rest of the training and suddenly he falls in love with her and proposed to her after a month?
Anyway, my other question is: When are you going to update? When will Yao, Ling and Chien-Po show up? Will we see the emperor again? Will one of the soldiers get infatuated with Mulan?
| beurre d'arachide chapter 8 . 2/6
pleeeaaseee write more! I love this story! 3
| Lisa Cooper chapter 8 . 2/6
Thank you. I agree your story, "For One For None", is excellent. I hope you have the time, interest, and ability to finish this story. Lisa Cooper
| Guest chapter 8 . 1/4
I love haw you bring ping back in to it
| Guest chapter 8 . 1/4
Love it sooooo much I couldn't stop reading I cried when it just stopped you have to right the next one maybe Shang should pay a visit :D scratch that I don't kear just right the next one
| lady candace chapter 8 . 12/23/2013
I was in the Mulan reading mode... I don't know if this was one of the problems that needed fixing but I don't understand the timeline: Mulan said it was a couple of months then, Shang said it was a year; Mulan also said its been a month since China was saved umm... I'm confused! Also, is this story going to be the same story or will you delete this one and start anew? On a different tangent, I really liked this story! I loved how Mulan came out as so smart and wise. I loved her speech on the arrow scene!
| Daughter of Gloriana chapter 8 . 12/8/2013
Now you just make me want to read the continuation even more! :D
| Galloping Horses chapter 8 . 12/1/2013
So awesome! Please update soon, as I am dying from suspense!
| Kimonos4me chapter 8 . 11/16/2013
This update was written in July 2012. Dropped possibly? Should I hope for a return? Really enjoyed the story thus far. Characters traits seem to be growing of their own accord in your story; in a good way of course.
| ElsaAnnaSnowQueen chapter 7 . 11/4/2013
I just burst out laughing when I saw the ping part
| Moonstone blaze chapter 8 . 10/31/2013
Wow even I think Mulan is impressive and want to meet her lol. I wonder if Shang saw that scene of the contest and what's he thinking. And it was an interesting perspective to see others admire Mulan and think Shang so lucky to have her. And thank you for continuing to write this story.
| MLH chapter 8 . 10/11/2013
Is this story still continuing? Please!
| fanfic addict o.0 chapter 8 . 9/29/2013
I love your story! you're a great writer!
| July's fantasies chapter 8 . 9/7/2013
helloo? I can't wait for updates! you've got to get this fic going! please! it's getting exciting!
| Anala chapter 8 . 9/6/2013
Please continue with this story! This is my second time reading through it, and I'd love to see the rest of it.
Keep up the good work!