|Reviews for Kishi no Kakera|
| Michael S. Repton chapter 27 . 2/13
Ahhhhh. It feels good to have time to read other fanfics again :) and I'm glad this one is still updating. That was an unexpected twist, having a "continuation" arc that follows the characters over the next few years. That gives you a bit more freedom, and gives us the chance to see your version of how they grow and develop. I'm looking forward to seeing how this is going to affect what happens when we get back to the "main" story, if it's okay for me to call it that.
Just a small nitpick: use only s, not 's, to denote a plural, for example, the Sonozakis.
| Joseph allan chapter 3 . 2/10
preety good, but i would try to build suspence more with some scenes
| Joseph allan chapter 3 . 2/5
not bad i enjoyed it.
| TheMagicManWithThePlan chapter 25 . 11/27/2013
I have a feeling I know who the masked man is... But I could be wrong... Keep up the good work! I wonder when were going to be reintroduced to Rika again...
| NightOwl1515 chapter 3 . 9/16/2013
I know that you said you wanted constructive criticism, but I'm not all that picky, so I didn't see anything .
| NightOwl1515 chapter 2 . 9/16/2013
I would be so nervous walking home with Rena.. She is adorable, but in the first arc she scared the shit out of me
O-o But anyways, this was really good, and I think you captured the characters pretty well. :)
| NightOwl1515 chapter 1 . 9/15/2013
This is really great, I can't wait to read more :D
| Killerbee77 chapter 23 . 8/29/2013
Great chapter, I'll be waiting for the next one!
| TheMagicManWithThePlan chapter 22 . 8/11/2013
Don't end the story here! Please tell me he gets a chance or two more. To end it in this timeline would be cruel... All in all it was a great chapter, and you can be really creative with the disease, like even add supernatural phenomena to it. That would be cool. I really like this story and I hope it last I little longer and doesn't end on this ark. It wouldn't be right without Rika! Everyone must be together in the end! No matter what!
| Sweethatred chapter 22 . 7/21/2013
Every now and then you come across someone who really knows how to write. While I do enjoy your plot it's your style of writing that really makes this fic stand out. I wouldn't be able to find anything wrong with it even if I tried.
Regarding my opinion on introducing Umineko elements well I think my avatar pic pretty much has that covered hehe. On a serious note regarding the introduction of such elements you could do it in such a way that it eases people who haven't seen/read Umineko into it. If you do it, it would also make your fic unique as I can't recall any long higurashi fanfic with Umineko influences.
| AlexandraDuffield chapter 21 . 7/8/2013
Are you going to upload this story or are you done ith it?
| Michael S. Repton chapter 21 . 6/6/2013
Excellent chapter. The development of Rena's feelings was very well done, and that scene at the end was just beautiful. The other characters were well written too, and I liked the way you showed Ryan and Shion moving towards understanding and tentative friendship. (Shion's always been my other favourite character, along with Rena.)
One small point. Where you say "Now all the Yamainu are evil" - judging from the context, you probably meant the exact opposite, "Not all the Yamainu are evil"?
| TheMagicMan chapter 21 . 6/3/2013
THIS STORY MUST BE CONTINUED!
| Killerbee77 chapter 20 . 5/12/2013
I really liked this chapter, keep it up! I hope the next chapter comes out soon!
| PulsationOfMusic chapter 20 . 5/12/2013
Just finished reading the story for the first time up to now The day after ch.20 was posted. LOVE THIS STORY!¡ KEEP WRITING MORE