Reviews for The Serpent Incident
librarywitch chapter 22 . 4/15/2014
Delightful read. I love these to universes and you have done a wonderful job of joining them together. Hope you can get back to it soon.
librarywitch chapter 6 . 4/15/2014
I love this. It is a wonderful weaving of the two worlds. I can't wait to read the rest of it. Well done.
Reldresal chapter 22 . 4/11/2014
You say the Doctor has wiped out entire species. But then you also claim he's guilty of destroying a race you've just made up. Not to mention the bits that say he's unclean and he swears. He's even threatened with castration. Has he ever actually said he has a penis?
Totenkinder Madchen chapter 22 . 3/3/2014
*sniffle* Dammit, Snake, stop being a fascinatingly damaged character! I swear someone's been chopping onions in here.

I love that you ran with the "Iowa ninja" headcanon, though. The comments about corn and jab at Nebraska are just too perfect. Also, I'm pretty sure that diner you mentioned is the one four blocks from my place. I'm not exactly in a small town, but diners of that model seem to be an Iowa thing. There may be a machine stamping them out somewhere ...

And of course the Doctor gets himself shot. He's really not used to dealing with enemies who use plain bullets, is he? It's usually mind control or stealing faces or something.

Delightful as ever. I can't wait to see where they go next! I'm picturing baby Flint throwing up on someone ... probably Beach.
rassilon chapter 14 . 3/2/2014
For example, did you see The Day Of The Doctor, which said that the Doctor did not wipe out either the Time Lords or the Daleks? As for the rest, do you get your facts about Doctor Who from Wikipedia?
brielle17 chapter 1 . 2/27/2014

one: i dont speek english - im sorry for my bad english :) i reed this Story with help Google - Translator
two: i find your Story very good and i hope for many chapters.
I need more chapters ;)

So - ab jetzt in Deutsch :)
Ich finde deine Story sehr gut und hoffe auf mehr Kapitel. Dein Schreibstil ist sehr gut und du schreibst sehr spannend. Lass dich nicht unterkriegen durch negative Kritik. Dein Doktor ist zwar etwas nicht Serien konform - was sollts :) Es ist nun mal eine Fanfiction... da darf man ja seine eigene Fantasie mitbenutzen. Ich bin schon sehr drauf gespannt, wie es weitergeht und hoffe, du machst weniger Pausen zwischen den Kapiteln und scheibst sie auch wieder ein wenig länger..
Soll deine Muse mit dir sein..

Liebe Grüße

rassilon chapter 22 . 2/26/2014
Cleaner than that? He's not dirty at all, and hasn't been for fifty years. Let's be honest, this fanfic claims he's guilty of a lot of things Doctor Who has never said he is.
sil chapter 22 . 2/25/2014
In The Invisible Enemy in 1977, the Doctor's blood was seen. He didn't bleed like he does here, because Doctor Who is suitable for children, but his bloodstream was shown and he examined a sample of his own blood under a microscope. His blood is the same colour as ours. He's been to America several times, and he's never insulted any of it. As for the crumbs and unwashed teacup, he is cleaner than that.
sil chapter 22 . 2/25/2014
The TARDIS is sentient. But it is a sentience quite unlike human beings, and it certainly does not have emotions you can sense. The Doctor used to eat Jelly BABIES, not Jelly Beans, and he was last seen with some in 1996.
sil chapter 22 . 2/24/2014
Unless the Doctor has adjusted his key, only he can use it. Son of a bitch? Creepy-ass ship?
Lady Jaye1 chapter 22 . 2/20/2014
Not signed in since I'm at work, but I enjoyed the update. succeeded in making me homesick for good Midwestern food. I miss the giant pork tenderloin sandwiches. No one around me has even heard of them. *shakes head*
tigerwolfspellbear chapter 22 . 2/18/2014
Snake Eyes and Scarlett are cute at the end. Makes me wonder if the Doctor will wake up to them cuddling and how he will react to it as prudish as he can be. You definitely hit the feels with Snake Eyes getting to see his parents, even if it was just momentary. As always, the little details like his left heart always getting the damage really add to the story. I hope you weave some of Tommy teasing Snake Eyes about almost being a Jessica in somehow.
Shiary chapter 22 . 2/18/2014
Very nice chapter
gamingkitty chapter 22 . 2/18/2014
Nebraskan here, but I'll give you a pass on the interstate jab ;) .

Very nicely done, and I liked the nod to Classic Who with the frost-healing. (For the other reviewers, I think it was Three who did that.)
Quathis chapter 22 . 2/17/2014
Times are rough for the time traveling ninja master from Iowa that almost got names Jessica. Tommy will continue his pain with that I'm sure. Nice touch with the Doctor taking a bullet for him. I get the feeling Snake Eyes will be mother henny over him when he wakes up. That should be odd, even for the Doctor. Until next time.
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