|Reviews for Brotherly Instinct|
| tortoise of immense chocolate chapter 4 . 4/9/2013
wow. Poor logan. good luck reading the books. i love them :)
this fan-fiction is great. well done. please update as fast as you can.
:) if you ever want anyone to chat about the books with just P.M me :Deat plot :D
great plot too,
| Guest chapter 4 . 3/16/2013
I like it. Are you going to finish it? I would really like it if you updated soon! )
| Hello chapter 4 . 11/21/2012
Aaaaw, poor Logan, I feel so sorry for him, he is just so adorable!More as soon as you can please, thank you for sharing this xxxxxxxxxxxx
| mitzyspain chapter 4 . 11/18/2012
aww, sweet Logan,
Love the fic you did a really good job.
| AirabellaTwilightLover chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
yay amazing story I absolutly love it :) Keep updating it!
| alliycat3101 chapter 4 . 8/10/2012
Awe, Logan was crying. That's sad. :( Update soon.
| allseer15 chapter 4 . 8/10/2012
I love how you get Logan's child fears of his parents never coming back. And you get his adult determination and still make him a young child. I think you nailed pretty much all of Logan's sides and thoughts in this chapter. Please update soon!
| alliycat3101 chapter 3 . 7/31/2012
Awe! Logan is so cute! Update soon? Please.
| SuperNatural1985 chapter 3 . 7/31/2012
I like the differences in this fic between the twins. We know from Kelley's writing that they are very different. I can't help but think an older child would make a better play mate for Logan. Maybe one who understood all the concepts and things he is into. I also like his loyalty to his sister and family. He's going to make an amazing werewolf someday. Also I just thought about what great friends Reese and Logan would make I bet.
Can't wait to see what happens.
| AirabellaTwilightLover chapter 2 . 6/26/2012
write more! Please write moer! I loooooove elena clay the twins and the entire pack! Write more pretty please!
| Charmedmich chapter 2 . 6/26/2012
I find this interesting as the series does not delve into what the children are like. Well done.
| miss jayne76 chapter 2 . 6/26/2012
Really good chapter! I'm going to have to look up these characters so I can really appreciate what you are writing! Xxx you are fabulous! Xxx
| miss jayne76 chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
You have intrigued me! I have never heard of 'the woman of the otherworld' or the book 'frostbitten'. Interesting chapter! You are amazing!
I would make a crap beta for you because my spelling and grammar is awful (as you may of noticed) but if you ever need someone to help you I'm here for you! Xxx ps I am still crying. It started with shattered (fabulous story) and then every update from other authors has sent me on an emotional rollercoaster leaving me a blubbering mess. But I do love the angst! Xxx take care you brilliant writer xxx