|Reviews for Two Of A Kind Part 3|
| Krato chapter 30 . 1/2
We're ALL still reading :-)))
Fav line of the chapter (obviously) ...he had to save his own skin and Harry's first. That thought stopped all others in their tracks, Harry, his partner, his beautiful, stunning ….lover...
And he's right, Harry is going to be upset that he didn't confide in her, whatever his reasons. Glad he's now turning to Spikings though.
Love this line from Maddy: "And you address her as DI Hunt when she's acting on police business." Barked Gene. Maddy suddenly found her hackles rising at Gene's rudeness "And you address me as Miss Andrews when you come round here shouting the odds." Gene deserved that, cocky git! They're supposed to be, if not friends than at least acquaintances and he should show more respect.
Liked the tennis match comparison as Harry tries to understand the conversation between Spikings and Dempsey. She is sooooo gonna give him a hard time over this and I think she'll also find herself emotionally torn. Being his control will be hard for her - too much like overseeing a runaway train.
Hope we don't have to wait so long for chapter 31 ;-)
| angie86 chapter 30 . 12/31/2013
You make Dempsey sound really panicked. Even more than in the Burning itself. And it’s all cause of Harry. Going under deep cover means leaving her alone and unprotected.
Love Gene being Gene when they go visit Maddy. I could so hear his verbal rudeness and harshness when he was trying to get some info from her and Max. I’m with Gene, she knows something...
| Duann chapter 30 . 12/31/2013
The story becomes more complicated.
The burning was one of the best epiosodes.
I will be interesting to see what happens when Coltraine is back and they are lovers
| goroslin chapter 30 . 12/30/2013
Well well...I really love the way you're revisiting the Coltrane case...It's surely gonna be very interesting to have Dempsey undercover with Harry left outside, now that they are lovers...Can't wait to see how it goes but I guess I am learning patience with you;-) Please keep going soon Xxxx
| Lady Omenia chapter 30 . 12/29/2013
Awesome. I have been waiting for another chapter. I must say I wasnt expecting the beggining of season 3 . Nicely done. Please another one soon.
| schwesty alex77 d chapter 30 . 12/29/2013
2 chapters in one day! Great!
And don't worry, i'm sure everybody is as thrilled as i am!
Thanks again and write soon!
| abeed chapter 30 . 12/29/2013
Loved this bit - 'That thought stopped all others in their tracks, Harry, his partner, his beautiful, stunning ….lover. Dempsey felt his blood turn to ice in his veins...' Love that they're lovers! :-)
Please don't leave it so long for #31
| angie86 chapter 29 . 11/26/2013
For a moment there, I suspected Leroy to be the gunman... but no! Mysterious Dan has finally revealed his mission. Must admit I wasn’t expecting the plot to be suddenly connected with the events from The Burning which is kinda crucial episode for Dempsey’s situation. And now with Gene & Alex involved, it’s going to be very interesting. Wonder if you’ll be sending Dempsey into deep cover...and how Harry will react when she learns the whole truth.
Hope you’ll find some writing time very soon! Leave #the50s and come back to #the80s ;-))
| goroslin chapter 29 . 11/10/2013
ok miss, we are reviewing right? so get on with it ;-)
cant wait to see what you are gonna end up doing with that burning episode ...will be great I'm sure!
| Krato chapter 29 . 11/4/2013
No Leroy for two weeks! Are they able to get a phone number or something for Maddy through Harry's association with Maddy's father? The little details were great - the folding of the sheets etc.
Lovely description of the old warehouse and The Burning run-thru. So the timeline isn't relevant? You're using the scenario to fit in as a twist to your story? Sorry if I'm being dumb but you know I can't help it :-)
Given the fact that the D&M relationship has progressed rather a lot since the original of The Burning, I'm looking forward to seeing how Harry reacts to the threat of Coltrane this time around. Quite a bit of scope for angst methinks and hopes ;-)
| abeed chapter 29 . 10/23/2013
Woohoo! Miss QQ is back! :-) Mmmmm so Leroy really has disappeared. I like him, am sure he'll come good. The Burning with a twist, interesting! Roll on #30 :-)
| alex chapter 29 . 10/20/2013
Oh! What a nice surprise! I feared you wouldn't write anymore...
Thanks for the update ! Can't wait for the next one... Soon?
| sash queen of the jungle chapter 29 . 10/20/2013
Wonder where leyroy has gone. Thanks for update please write more soon.
| haveunotthought chapter 29 . 10/20/2013
Ok I'm up and running and ready for my updates
| Krato chapter 28 . 7/3/2013
Loved the feel of this chapter.
...Pot plants had appeared in soulless white corners, pictures had appeared on blank walls….his couch now had a matching pair of scatter cushions which co-ordinated with a brand new bean bag...
And the line... The evidence of two very different lives dove tailing and melding together was clear to see. It was a gradual, unconscious process of two lives becoming one... was gorgeous. Reminded me very much of something Haveunotthought might write.
The Lady Harley-Fartington thing was fun and I loved Dempsey's line... "Well then stagger fast. If she catches you I'll pay for the therapy."...
Dempsey's only been in England for less than a year?
So is the note from Leroy? 'Do what 'they' tell you' sounds like the writer of the note is on Dempsey's side.
With Harry not being there when he woke up, I was about to ask if she had stayed over at the Harley-Fartington residence - D&M sound so very homey together that I forgot they aren't actually living together...yet.
Now can't wait to find out what the caller has for him and what this deal is that Dempsey is supposed to know about.
Loved this chapter.
Roll on #29 :-)