Reviews for Forging A King |
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averageschmoe chapter 1 . 1/22 Wherever you are, good luck and godspeed... |
hdres chapter 48 . 10/3/2024 I am enjoying your story and the odd direction changes that you are putting in. The changing circumstances are keeping me guessing particularly with Sirius making such a hash of the rescue. Thank you for sharing your writing |
Royaussie chapter 58 . 7/14/2024 That was so much fun. Thank you heaps., im so hoping to find the next story of yours. Great deal of fun. |
Royaussie chapter 42 . 7/13/2024 Thus is great. I wish there where 50 more chapters as i love your writing and style. Thank you so much for letting us read your work. |
IdolaCandrie chapter 58 . 3/31/2024 One of the best crossover I've read! |
angelflower2000usyahoo.com chapter 40 . 2/3/2024 At this point Harry only has 8 of the stones, so he still needs to find 5, not 4. |
Guest chapter 30 . 12/18/2023 Right been reading this story, literally no different to LOTR original. Harry doesn’t read as strong but a weak lad with cheat stones letting him move faster and letting everyone tell him what to do and when. No offence but the Harry of your story is nothing alike to a king. A popular quote, a king must be as selfless as he is selfish. Harry is merely selfless and like in the original HP books comes off as bland because he holds no ambitions or wants for a family. The most successful and complete fan fictions tend to go off the beaten path else their readers realise what’s the difference between this and the original |
Alex chapter 18 . 11/30/2023 My favorite part of holiday dinner is the curried fruit my family makes. Also, I get people saying happy holidays and even maybe saying you don’t celebrate it if someone incorrectly wishes you merry Christmas, but some people seem to get a bit too caught up in it. There’s no need to be rude when someone is trying to be nice, even if they missed the mark. |
Notareal chapter 58 . 11/22/2023 This is beautiful! 3 Thanks for writing; thanks for posting:D |
Notareal chapter 56 . 11/22/2023 Ah, a day off. Brilliant and currently occurring. I read books and fanfiction, I sleep in, and I bake or agree to play board or card games with my family. |
Notareal chapter 47 . 11/21/2023 I once got a plush sunflower from a claw machine. |
Notareal chapter 40 . 11/21/2023 Unless it was intended, just know that Gríma’s name is Wormtongue, not Wormtail. |
Notareal chapter 36 . 11/21/2023 I haven’t written a story here, but I did on Ao3. I gave up thanks to a combination of writer’s black and school. |
Notareal chapter 35 . 11/21/2023 I’m bringing either sugar cookie or chocolate chip cookie bars:) |
Notareal chapter 33 . 11/20/2023 Back when I was in elementary school, I dreamed that there was a train between the school and the playground, and that I and my friend jumped onto it. When we got kicked out for not having tickets, I ran into a different friend who, upon me realizing that I didn’t have my science experiment ready, taught me how to levitate by sitting on the ground and crossing my ankles. It was hilarious and I had that dream several times, actually. |