Reviews for Not here
La Lectora de Libros chapter 1 . 7/26/2014
Hahaha, el final estuvo bueno!
Batarang131 chapter 1 . 1/6/2014
it was a oogie but still cool.
kladdkakaegott chapter 1 . 11/6/2013
that was really good, I loved it. Nice picture too!
luciacuevad chapter 1 . 6/19/2013
YOU SHOULD CONTINUE THE STORY! :D this story is one of my favs! from the moment I strated reading it, I LOVED IT! whoever's with me say: continue the story lightskin!
TheLucky38 chapter 1 . 11/15/2012
Well if they can't do it there, how about outside in the springs? Just kidding it's awesome!

Let me tell you this, everyone is off every once in awhile. So don't beat yourself down for that. Just think about what happened and try to make it better. I bet that no one even noticed at all. 'Gives a thumbs up.' I give you good luck on your future stories. Oh sorry I mean good luck times a thousand and 38.
dramioneginnyharry chapter 1 . 7/31/2012
very good
A Magical Owl chapter 1 . 6/25/2012
Ha ha! I LOVED the way you ended it! XD great job!
Claire Cooper chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
I seen your picture I go by ALonewolf009 on DA and absolutely love that picture you drew :3
RandomPow3r chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
love :D 'Don't tempt me so!' ahhahahaha
Katsumara chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
Ha. Nice fluff!
LesbianWonderland chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
Love it! i wish there were more stories about the Promise - kataang ;)

ZHUY here!
Ashley Barbosa chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
Pretty Good story
Poupou-pidou chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
Nice fluff.

You should hit the return key more often though. It's hard to read when all the dialogue is stuck in the same place as the descriptions and all. Just remember to newline each time someone different speaks and it'll be much more readable.