I remember reading this fic as a teenager and finding the storyline hot. Now as an almost 30 year old, i'm disgusted at the thought of an older man sleeping with a troubled, orphaned teenager.

Ive tried multiple times but I just cant finish this story because the idea of a 30 year old man hooking up with a teenager is sick.

If Bella wants to read Edwards deleted email, she could just go through her trash bin. It should still be there.

I came back to read this story for a second time. I love the characters, the storyline, everything. Thank you!

rosalie is really pissing me off for some reason im skipping

A wonderful rollercoaster of a story. Lovely, eloquently written characters, with a lovely Bella (and I don’t say that very often). I have no idea how I have missed this until now, but I will be coming back again soon. Best fic I have read in ages. Thank you.

Hi Liz! Passionflix needs to make this story into a move. Is there any way you could submit it to Tosca Musk? It would be amazing!

Liz,

I can't tell you how many times I've read this story! I just came across it, and here I am again, laughing and swearing at both of these characters! It is definitely one of my all-time favs!

Hugs and good wishes to you! Sus

Edward was the one always trying to protect Bella from making dumb decisions, I guess we forgot about himself. Dumb, dumb, dumb!

Wonderful story.

I will admit I thought Bella was going to get pregnant in the last few chapters as the antibiotics would have made the birth control far less effective. It would have been funny.

Great story. Loved all the British slang. I was surprised by the Jane thing but the ending was beautiful. Sweet story.

Okay... we need another nickname just for this Edward. I dub him Fuckwadward. He doesn't deserve this Bella.

Ugh... SO OVER men thinking they should decide what women want. Yuck yuck yuck. I know this story is complete, but I keep hoping this Edward will actually stop being such a prick.

Love this chapter. Thanks for the smiles you put on my face.

Yay!