Reviews for Under the Sheets
heza-chan24 chapter 4 . 6/23/2014
Aww I liked this. So simple yet conveyed so much feeling. Great job! :)
mct chapter 4 . 6/21/2014
truly amazing. i've read this fic gazillion times and it still gets to me. this deserves more reviews than it already has
Richi-chan chapter 4 . 1/23/2014
Hmmm... I will admit that despite this story's -let's call them more angsty parts - I found it most pleasant to read. I'm not sure if you are even going to read this review as this fic was likely finished a long time ago - but I want to give you some feedback anyway.

Your writing style is really fluid and the story flows beautifully, more than well enough to overlook any small technical/grammatical errors you made (which weren't many to begin with).

The problem often encountered with many fics I've read on this site is that they often rush to the destination of the pairing getting together and don't focus enough on the journey getting there, if that makes sense. To my pleasant surprise, however, this fic did not fall victim to that trend despite being an M-Rated fic with some citric content thrown in. Serious kudos on that to you good sir/madam.

I could go on about many more things, but I shall simply leave it at saying 'Congratulations, and thank you for bringing this very well polished gem into being - keep on being awesome'.
Qchessy chapter 4 . 7/7/2013
Sexy and Amazing Ending I read all the chapters
Ookami RP chapter 4 . 3/27/2013
awh loved it
KirosaChan chapter 1 . 3/21/2013
This was the best NaruHina fanfiction I have ever read. Keep :-P the good work.
xxxFlamingWingsxxx chapter 4 . 3/11/2013
Not your usual naruhina story. But it's what made this amazing. Simply, breathtaking. Good job on this one!
HanaChou chapter 4 . 3/4/2013
i liked it! 3
no no..scratch that please, i loved it..with the transition of events. tihee. good job!
charliemay91 chapter 1 . 1/30/2013
sweet :)
Romiette33 chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
Wow I love it
Codename-ShadowFox chapter 4 . 10/24/2012
Awesome short story!
sapphireshadow97 chapter 4 . 9/7/2012
this story is amazing, keep on writing
Guest chapter 4 . 8/30/2012
Aw, sweet. thanks!
Guest chapter 2 . 8/30/2012
ooooh tense. What happens next?
Guest chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
Awesome so far. )
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