Reviews for History's Most Chaotic Disciple |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Is soo epic |
![]() ![]() ![]() For all that this is different then canon, this is basically Ranma 1/2 20 years in the future in a AU, with a darker twist to the plot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah well, this was entertaining. It's too bad you never finished it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great writing, I hope you come back to it someday! |
![]() ![]() ![]() what's the point of ki locked? it's just nerf bat hitting him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man this story was so good I read it all in one sitting, |
![]() ![]() ![]() You hinted at it from near the beginning. You even begged Ranma to not do it, but he got himself into a very dark situation real quick. Something I was not expecting with how light hearted things had been. I'm more surprised that Ranma's reactions hadn't completely changed after that ordeal for a long while. Overall a very nice story. It took its time to meander around being realistic about Ranma's reactions and their consequences. I just wish the elder hadn't refused him from the very beginning. That single decision kicked off nearly everything else. I'm kind of surprised that he didn't mention it. Also surprising that he wasn't involved with the rescue mission when his own granddaughter was on the line. It would have helped a lot. I'd be interested to see how Ranma's new chi ability works out in the future, perhaps even leading him to some healing abilities. Still, he has to survive the upcoming interests coming for him first. Not something easy for him. It sounded like there may be more in the future, but I'm glad you stopped when you did. That whole ordeal had me up late as Ranma was trained'. So glad things didn't end there. Anyway, great job on the story! |
![]() ![]() The stupidest thing about this story is how you force this repeat of Ranma being dumped into a situation he despises, without considering his feelings about being dumped 20 years into the future, and suddenly, you make a stupid marriage thing, while completely rushing and moving the story too fast. I’m not saying that Ranma should become angsty, but he should have definitely felt more bitter and resentful, instead of casually going to “marry” two dumb OC’s. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Y miiss youuu |
![]() ![]() ![]() really hope this isn't dead! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I always hated how fanfic characters saw Ranma's female form as just a kink. Crone pisses me off as per usual. Still reading though. |
![]() ![]() I like how people got to Kiss of Marriage thing and gave up on this story. It's actually pretty good. The sentences are structured well, the plot is decent, and there aren't many grammar mistakes. What more can you hope for from fanfiction? |
![]() ![]() Ugh, Ranma just getting a new amazon fiancee in the very first chapter is super contrived. Better to stop reading here, it certainly doesn't bode well for the rest of the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm sorry but when you started that stupid 'kiss of marriage' shit I wanted to see Ranma gently cradle Reiko's head in his hands and tell her she is beautiful and that she is a better Martial Artist than he is... right before his hands snap her neck. After all, the Amazons believe in the ancient tradition of 'The Kiss of Death'. Wouldn't that have made Cologne happy seeing Ranma respecting her village's beliefs. Off to read something better. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well Mousse was always a depressing guy to watch lol. |