|Reviews for Sunset of the First Age|
| seasprays chapter 2 . 9/26/2012
Intruiging. I must say I got a bit of a surprise when you mentioned a mobile phone in a wheel of time fiction. Nice long chapters too. Looking forward to continuing reading.
| Starsinger chapter 2 . 8/10/2012
I don't mean to get nitpicky here, but, scorpions, wasps, and bees don't bite. I wouldn't be afraid of that end. The nasty end is a stinger that contains poison at the end of its tail, not in its mouth. That should be "I hope you get stung by a scorpion," not "I hope you get bitten by a scorpion," anatomically not scary, being bitten by a scorpion. Otherwise, pretty good.
| Insane Winxy chapter 2 . 8/7/2012
what time or year is it?
| Insane Winxy chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
This is gona take forever to write..
But I hope you do...
one question are you alone on this?