Reviews for I Was Holding on to You
Loki67 chapter 15 . 7/7/2012
s'kay i'm just being mardy for other reasons lol. I love writing this fic and ofcourse I won't keep you waiting too long :D I always had an overall plot, just needs tweaking! x
Guest chapter 15 . 7/7/2012
really glad they are both gone
it would have been fine by me if they had a specific role to play but i hate filler characters.
anyway hope the story can progress faster now and be back on track.
please don't feel down, its never too late to fix it, cheer up and continue working on your story.
my advice to you is to plan where you are heading with your story before writing and posting.
waiting for your next update, don't keep us waiting for long plzzzzz
Guest chapter 15 . 7/7/2012
Yay! i am sooooo glad they are gone
Guest chapter 17 . 7/6/2012
Actually kind of excited to see where you go with Adam and Samuel, I like to see side character interactions with the min characters as well, I think it really allows for us to see every dimension of the character. Update soon!
Guest chapter 17 . 7/6/2012
just read all three new updates(including your note)
honestly i am also against adding Adam and Samuel too but its your story and as long as you know where u want to take it from here then its fine by me,
but what i loved most about this story was the devotion the brothers held to each other and adding John as a villain was also fine by me, but ever since you added Castiel (bobby could have helped Dean get free and redeemed himself instead of Cas) and then Adam and Samuel, i just felt they were unnecessary additions, hope you truly know where you are taking this, wishing you best of luck in the coming chapters, i will be waiting...
Souless666 chapter 17 . 7/6/2012

if you pay attention to what Micheal says to Dean when he thinks he's speaking to Adam, Adam is not even in his body.

Micheal says, "Sorry, Adam's not home right now"

Also, remember, Adam's body got burned up in Holy fire. So, more then likely, Adams in heaven and was never in Lucifer's cage. I think that is why Death wasn't willing to bring back both brothers. simply cause Adam was not even in the cage.

And, even if Adam was sharing his body with Micheal, even after the Holy Firing, unlike Sam, Micheal would not be looking to protect his mind from the possession, not the way Lucifer was doing for Sam. So, more then likely, Adam's soul was a drooling mess in the cage and would have looked like Raphael's meat suit in "Free to be you and me".
Guest chapter 16 . 7/6/2012
two updates in such short notice :D
i never liked Adam nor Samuel in the show, definitely NOT my favorite characters, really hope they get their work done and be finished with it, and then we can go be back to Sam and Dean especially after Sam's regression again, i am surprised he even recognized John in this state, he will probably be completely destroyed beyond repair when he realizes what John's motives really are.
AlxM chapter 17 . 7/6/2012
You did great with this story! :) I'm really enjoying it. Good job.
nupinoop296 chapter 17 . 7/6/2012
Oh, Sam. :( Poor baby. And poor Dean, too! ;w; I hope they'll be reunited soon.
babyreaper chapter 17 . 7/6/2012
Just read the latest updates, and I can see that Dean maybe needs help in finding Sammy, and I suppose Adam is an OK choice although I found him to be a pain in the neck in the show. Samuel is another kettle of fish however never liked him in the show, so not sure how much help they are going to be, unless they are bother completely different than I remember, But I think they are too late to save Sam, he believes that Dean did this, that Dean doesn't love him and now John has turned up, that can't be good, is it the real John?. God I wish Cas had let Dean shoot him. Looking forward to more, I love it. Thanks.
LadyAislynnWolfe2015 chapter 15 . 7/6/2012
I love the charectors you added it makes sense Castiel is an angel and he can't always be there to keep Dean in line. And with Dean unwilling to forgive Bobby he is going to need the emotional support a better father figure then John in Samuel and Adam to get him to have fun... I just hope Crowley doesn't turn Sam against Dean because that would make me want to rip him to shreds.
Guest chapter 15 . 7/6/2012
Yay! I love this chapter! Poor Dean, but I'm so glad you decided to bring Adam into it, he's by favorite character!
Guest chapter 15 . 7/6/2012
Sorry to tell you but this was one uneventful chapter and to be honest i think Cas was all the help Dean needed to find Sam( i mean he is an angel for crying out loud what could Samuel and Adam possibly offer more than Cas and Bobby?) , and adding more characters just doesn't help with the amazing relationship you built between Sam and Dean, please focus on the brothers and enough with all the side characters you keep adding every other chapter, sorry if i offended you but i love your story soooooo much and can't bear to see it divert from its original plot line without mentioning it, waiting for more soon
AlxM chapter 15 . 7/6/2012
Adam! YAYY! :) Awesome job!
HP4eva12 chapter 15 . 7/6/2012
Gotta love castiel...
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