|Reviews for The Empire: Book IV|
| justin chapter 8 . 1/8
In future fanfics about arya and eragon try not to make arya stumble with her words so much. Though this is a situation she hasn't faced before,but she is still very confident and right here she has been acting very rash and nervous
| HappyPNF chapter 23 . 10/29/2013
Cool story; I would say this is like a condensed version of Inheritance fanfic style with the EragonXArya actually happening, more survivors in the end, and a happier and more clean closing than the canon. I would say however that the story is rather linear and too predictable, it made it slightly less entertaining. Still like it though; ExA rocks!
BTW: Shouldn't it be three years later instead of three months? I don't recall babies going from birth to the age of 3 in three months :)
| Guest chapter 23 . 9/18/2013
Fantastic story! loved every single chapter keep up the good work!
| rairio chapter 23 . 8/14/2013
wow it was an amazing read. could not put it down, great job
| SonOfPoseidon05 chapter 23 . 7/28/2013
I can't believe that a story like this would have been started and finished without me knowing. It seems like it's been a long long time since I've visited this part of fanfiction. Anyway, a really good work done :) I like how you saved Izlandi thus freeing Arya from the burden of the crown. Looking forward to the sequel :)
| FanBoyNinja chapter 23 . 7/21/2013
I want more.
I am not one to read incomplete fanfiction, so when I saw that The Empire: Book IV was finally complete I was very happy, to say the least.
I read through this, dare I say, masterpiece within a single day, and I was pleasantly surprised at the outcome, hence, the whole masterpiece naming thingy.
You have done a wonderful job here, and I simply cannot wait for the announced sequel.
| Aryaeragononly chapter 23 . 7/20/2013
Amazing! You manged to make a grown man cry. The story was better in many ways than Inheritance. But cause my nature, when it comes to play its crushed pine needles not fresh pine cones. Thank god you didn't name firnin eridor I've seen people do that. But thanks so much for that story! It was perfect!
| kanjichibi chapter 23 . 7/3/2013
it is just like inheritance.
| Guest chapter 23 . 7/2/2013
O. MY. GLOB. THAT STORY WAS AMAZING! A. MAZE. ING! I need to know when the sequel comes out!
| UnmatchedIntellect chapter 16 . 6/30/2013
Im actually quiteglad you kept the vault of souls similar to Paolini,because it seemed to makea lot of sense and helped move plot well, but i bet after this similarity,you will change things up a lot.
| Evatross chapter 23 . 6/29/2013
You of Indian origin too?! SWAGGAH! Lol... anyways, excellent story, and I will be waiting and watching for your next one. Look up 'Across Ages' and 'Shatter', if you'd like. They're by me XD! Anyways, thanks!
| OechsnerC chapter 23 . 6/27/2013
please make another book 6 i love your story it may take some planning and i can give ideas just let me know awesome writer
| Dessert Maniac chapter 23 . 6/27/2013
Nice epilogue, congratulations on completing this story! Very well done, and I'm looking forward to the sequel, :)
| Belgrath chapter 23 . 6/25/2013
Cant wait for the sequal. May the stars watch over you
| Elemental Dragon Slayer chapter 23 . 6/25/2013
Awesome, epic ending. Too many words, not enough space to describe the great ending. Top stuff bro. :D
And Eragon's shock... 'Another?!' xD Classic. Selena and Evandar are fitting names too, nice idea.
All in all, it was just well done and wrapped up neatly. Look forward to the sequel.