|Reviews for Madara's Grandson|
| lexus4444 chapter 11 . 7/13/2015
To me this unfinished story is one of your better stories. I started in the night and couldn't stop until there wasn't anything left to read. The other story that read like this is the crossover involving Percy. You made a couple of mistakes in spelling but that didn't take away from the story. Thanks for giving the audience something to read.
| nerdnproud chapter 11 . 6/22/2015
F*** YES! YES YES YES YES YES! WAGE F****** WAR NARUTO!
| dkdc chapter 7 . 6/19/2015
ok i must admit, this fic is awsome
| dkdc chapter 4 . 6/19/2015
you have a very good idea your story is very intresting, howeverm, ild suggest you work on your grama...there are many mistakes you made...overol an awsome story
| michumichu79 chapter 11 . 6/16/2015
ES UNA GRAN LASTIMA QUE LLEVES TANTO TIEMPO SIN ACTUALIZAR ESTE FIC DE VERDAD ES BUENISIMO TIENE DE TODO UN POCO PLISSSS CONTINUALO. I LOVE NARUHINA, GAAHINA AND ITAHINA!
| Guest chapter 11 . 6/10/2015
Type your review chap.
| Andod chapter 11 . 5/28/2015
Just read all 11 chapters today and I'm loving the story so far! I can't wait for the next chapter! Maybe get a beta reader for the few spelling and grammar mistakes but otherwise good work!
| Uchiha Angga-sama chapter 11 . 5/4/2015
harem my bro I want harem...
just kurenai and anko I will be happy...
but if you can add the other to like tsunade,,,,
please my bro...
| WhatzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzUP chapter 11 . 4/14/2015
Loved the story and hope to see it updated eventually. Your story is fairly unique and has its own twists and turns. Naruto appears OP...no he is OP but then again it is to be expected when being trained by the strongest shinobi in history for the first ten years of your life I suppose...Battles are a bit short, but in a sense I like that as well, a lot of these scenes are repetitive in that they are in EVERY story essentially. Would love to see you alter from the story-line more, make it more unique but it is still very well written overall in my opinion. Hope to see more!
| Skyray chapter 3 . 4/11/2015
"But too bad, I know everything about you. My father has written everything about you in his diary."
| Skyray chapter 2 . 4/11/2015
I think you're overusing plot shortcuts here lol illusions, acting, more illusion, teleportation, faked unspecified emotions xD
Oh well, looks like rushing to get to a point, so maybe will finally slow down soon?
| Skyray chapter 1 . 4/11/2015
idk, the summary didn't cross the line into bullshit so i decided to give it a got, but something about this writing style makes it hard to keep attention on the text... so ended up skimming through it... though has some interesting plot points there! So guess I'm hoping now that (cough) "Karasu" came into it the story will switch to him/his POV and have more detail/focus.
| Guest chapter 11 . 4/1/2015
We need more
| willy-kun chapter 11 . 4/2/2015
bro muy buena historia
| Queen of Darkness and Lightnes chapter 11 . 3/28/2015
I LOVEEEE IT MORE PLEASE