Reviews for Madara's Grandson
demon chapter 4 . 7/11/2012
lively the continuation supert history
Sir sleeps all day everyday 12 chapter 4 . 7/11/2012
Great chapter. There's some words you misplaced like when you said "what do want..." should be "what do you want". It might have been a common mistake cause you wrote to fast or something. Also not "he is really changed" but "he has really changed" as i said commOn mistakes. Overall just fixs your grammar and your story should be fine
Aaron Leach chapter 4 . 7/11/2012
Awesome chapter.
war sage chapter 1 . 7/9/2012
nice chapter.
0 Jordinio 0 chapter 2 . 7/8/2012
Fuck, your grammar is fucking pathetic.
Super Saiyan God Gogeta chapter 3 . 7/8/2012
Your grammar is horrible in this chapter.
FireKing500 chapter 3 . 7/8/2012
Ah very nice, making Kakashi choose between naruto and the Sandaime. I cant wait until Naruto fully reveals him to the world. I bet you are going to be close to the canon, maybe have Zabuaza(sp?) and Haku live, once Sasuke deserts the Leaf, naruto is going to bring him back and the council is going to banish him and that is where he is going to reveal who his parents are not his grandfather? Whatever you do, its gonna be good.
Guest chapter 3 . 7/8/2012
Come on buddy why aren't u uploadin ryujin's next chapter
Guest chapter 3 . 7/7/2012
Nice keep going
Forgottenkami chapter 3 . 7/7/2012
great story like your other one
Silber D. Wolf chapter 3 . 7/7/2012
Awesome chapter, I hope that you update soon
Guest chapter 1 . 7/7/2012
Learn english, god damn. 'He will becomes' lmao. Or at least get a beta that isn't braindead. Otherwise, it's an alright start, I suppose.
Guest chapter 3 . 7/7/2012
hope naruto never reveal his true ryu identity and keeps it as a secret.
war sage chapter 3 . 7/7/2012
great chapter. i love fics that have naruto with madara as a grandfather and the like anyway keep it up.
Guest chapter 3 . 7/7/2012
I've read all three chapter very nice.
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