I LOVED this! It made me smile and I adored a supportive and respectful Hermione. Thank you.

I really want to know what happens next so I hope there's a sequel.

mwahahahahaha! : )

I have to admit that canon Harry acts too much like a doormat for his heroism otherwise to make much sense. 9ur very funny tale really demonstrates this.

Thank you.

This is yet another one of those "Let's make everyone who dares go against Harry in any way a complete idiot" stories. I would say in disappointed, but I can't even being myself to care anymore. They're a dime a dozen, and universally awful.

Very well done story. Too bad the lack of Riddle being dealt with at the end.

Great story but I facepalmed at the incredibly annoying comments about Harry and Hermione getting together.

They know eachother too well? Thats kind of the point. You don't want to hook up with a stranger and you'd eventually get to know them very well and can't help that unless you purposely keep from getting to know who you're with yet take things further.

Then the sentence I hate so damned much. They're like a sister (or brother) to them. Really? How would Harry even know what that's like with his life experience? He's more likely to have issues knowing what love is or jumping the gun and thinking friendship or kindness equals love.

I had such a good mood going for once reading this well done story up to that point only for my good mood to plummet off a freaking cliff with that.

Utterly, devastatingly delightful!

Love it lol

This was a very fun romp! Thank you for sharing!

cute and hysterically funny

The fact that there is almost no narration and everything is conversation takes a lot away from the story... 10k words like that is torture and I shouldn't even have 1k

in addition to skipping key things, like the questions/answers under veristaserum

Instead of a 2 line explanation of what was in the letter you could have actually written the letter... it would have been 1000 times better.

The thing about making it so that as a descendant of a founder of Hogwarts I can do whatever I want is the stupidest thing ever and ever.

The 7th is missing so the story is incomplete.

summary: the story lacks narration almost completely, everything is conversation and in some parts it skips what would be some sentences, lack of explanation for almost everything... easily (at least someone with more narrative talent) could make a story of 6-7 chapters and at least 30k words with this and it would be 1000 or 10000 times better

This is sooooo good

good

Damn this never fails to make me laugh.
Very well done and a nice story. He really is using his inner marauder side, nice retribution for him.