Reviews for Alix Fray
Guest chapter 9 . 7/18/2013
The author's notes sort of interrupt the story a little. Maybe you could try putting them in as addendums to the chapters?
Guest chapter 4 . 7/17/2013
You want a comment? Well it is a good idea and so far a good story. As far as i know i am not a douchebag.
cursedtoearth chapter 3 . 4/17/2013
Looking forward to an update! Really good!
etraxler chapter 12 . 1/22/2013
I loved this story ] I started it and couldnt stop reading it until I finished
mendenbar chapter 12 . 11/18/2012
OOoh! Yummy! And a unique solution to The First and the prophecy.
johansen chapter 10 . 8/28/2012
Loved this chapter. Please update soon
mendenbar chapter 9 . 8/21/2012
How dare they? Work? I used to tell my boss that what he paid me was fine for what I did, but they expected me to work, I wanted more money! He usually laughed, at least until I found another job that paid better.
Person chapter 4 . 7/21/2012
if you'd like a bit of constructive criticism you could more descriptive but you are going in the right direction. Also if you know how to spot a witch from "Buffy the Vampire Slayer" Season 1 Ep. 3 then thats good too also avoid cliches and try to move in a more unexpected light makes the plot more interesting and take over the characters personalities completely sadly i cant tell you exactly what they would say. But remember: original is loved by everyone and so are witty jokes but i do think your work is terrific and i cant wait for Angel and Alix's romance to heat up. Go team Angix
johansen chapter 8 . 7/20/2012
I can't wait for your next chapter to come out. That was an awesome one with the cliffhanger too.
wildcat717 chapter 6 . 7/16/2012
This is good keep going
johansen chapter 5 . 7/10/2012
Great story. I can't wait til you update again