Reviews for Bring Back What Once Was Mine
Kureiji-Kurai chapter 1 . 3/29
Honestly, that scene always bothered me! Erik killed the guards in rage but never touched Shaw! He just left him alone and that did not even make sense! Thank you for hitting him, I feel better!
MoonlitSorrows chapter 8 . 5/3/2013
Oh my goodness! This story is so good. I really loved the gender change, while most were Charles swaps I liked how you added more to Erika's character and past. Wonderful story.
Megan1212 chapter 8 . 9/7/2012
I LOVED this story! I went looking for a second one but didnt see one lol. I give it 5 out of 5 stars!
Guest chapter 6 . 7/16/2012
Luv erik and i luv fem erk
StephanieLockedInTheTARDIS chapter 8 . 6/30/2012
That was really cute. I loved it.
Superdani4Ever chapter 8 . 6/27/2012
just found this story and OMG!are you trying to kill me with cuteness?

I LOVE YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!
erica.phoenix16 chapter 8 . 6/26/2012
Charles proposed to her, what a perfect way to end the story.
erica.phoenix16 chapter 7 . 6/26/2012
I'm glad Erika didn't turn evil and has gotten her children back!

Looks like Charles's love for her redeemed her. Sweet!

Although Shaw should've said "The four of us could do extraordinary things." Instead of "The three of us could do extraordinary things."

When Shaw told Erika he loves her, that made sound like a pedo.
erica.phoenix16 chapter 6 . 6/26/2012
Awww... Charles and Erika are growing closer:)

Shaw's the father!

Okay now that lifts him from just regular bad guy to a creepy pedo.

But wait a second, I thought the people from the camps weren't freed until four after Erika was brought there.

Wouldn't have that made Erika eighteen when she her children.

Also this was sixties, divorce and children born out wedlock would be a huge deal during that time.
erica.phoenix16 chapter 5 . 6/26/2012
Nice remake of that moment between Erick and Charles.
erica.phoenix16 chapter 4 . 6/26/2012
Ohh you shouldn't have done that Miss Frost, mothers are people you don't want to mess with, especially the ones that are mutants.

Since Raven's a mother in this story I thought she would much more serious.

Azazel's her ex and Kurt's father!

Wow, didn't see that coming.
erica.phoenix16 chapter 3 . 6/26/2012
That was nice of Erika to pray like that, and her talk with Kurt too.

Now that was heartwarming.
erica.phoenix16 chapter 2 . 6/26/2012
So Erika has Wanda and Pietro, and Shaw took them from her, now that just makes him seem like a stalker.

Raven has Kurt too!

I don't Erika would quite willing tell people about her past as a holocaust survivor.

It normally takes a long time to talk about a traumatic event.
erica.phoenix16 chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
Erik is a girl in this one, how interesting.

Though I always thought that Erik was ten when he taken the camp.