Reviews for No Ordinary Boy (ON HOLD)
Guest chapter 1 . 1/15/2013
Good work in being able to put your words down on paper and convey your ideas in an understandable manner. I would put this at a grade 11 level of quality in story telling. Try reading as many different authors as possible to get a sense of the different writing styles out there. You are not just having a conversation with yourself you are painting a picture with words.
spooky jaz chapter 2 . 10/30/2012
Its good u should finish it
random chapter 2 . 9/10/2012
wait thats it? what about the rest?
random chapter 1 . 9/10/2012
you wrote
She was the kind hearted person I've ever known
did you mean to put most?

other then that it was great!
Jenn520 chapter 2 . 8/28/2012
Love it! Keep going! I want more! Lol :)
Kirsty chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
ooooooh me likey! i want to know what happened to his dad! PLEASE continue