Reviews for Looking to the Future
iCyou chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
I love the way this ends. It's so abrupt that it's very realistic. No one gets to understand a death so sudden. You portrayed that well. No obvious grammar or spelling mistakes either. It's obvious that you put a lot of heart in it.

Oh, and I skimmed your profile: I dislike spiderman as well. Please... just make him go away! xD
wytchunter chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
OMG. The feels. This is beautiful :o Thank you!
SanShine chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
I think he knew very well what Tarrlok was up to and that he wanted it to end, because if his own brother would not forgive and accept him no one else would.

Your story is great, though :)
heavenlydragan chapter 1 . 6/26/2012

Loved it, shame they killed him off, he was a good character.
Ski October chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
This is quite an interesting take on that part of the finale.

Despite my dislike for both Amon/Noatak and Tarrlok - that actually lessened some after learning their past - it broke my heart when Tarrlok blew up their boat.

Wonderful job, dear!