Reviews for Forbidden Fruits
Guest chapter 9 . 6/4/2013
where is your next chapter?
To'M'L Kuran chapter 9 . 11/11/2012
Hey, I really like this story so far. I really like the idea of having Amon fall for a metal bender. Update please :)
sebby-fan chapter 7 . 7/24/2012
please do update soon
Nightwing's Gal chapter 9 . 7/6/2012
I love this story so far. Was Amon the person who healed her?
Guest chapter 8 . 7/3/2012
nice rewrite looking forward to your next one. Sebby-fan
Jouzhenkyn chapter 6 . 7/1/2012
wow I just realized there was a "Next" button, how lame am i xD
Jouzhenkyn chapter 5 . 7/1/2012
: sadface for reading up to the current update. Love the story so far though! 3
PSYCH0xSEXY chapter 8 . 6/30/2012
0_0 wow...I'm sorry but that lemon needs a alot more work to it. Format, word choice, etc. It seemed very rushed. Haha It felt like you were scared to type the lemon itself.
thearistocrat chapter 8 . 6/30/2012
Ah-ha! So he did leave his hood on! Well, for half of it. kekekeke.
This was pretty sexy. I don't really...imagine Noahtak though. He's...very attractive but too old for my tastes.
Anyway, I look forward to the next chapter! ]
thearistocrat chapter 7 . 6/30/2012
So, like, is he gonna have sex with her with the mask on? kekekee
This is a great fanfic! I enjoy reading it. Please update soon!
Guest chapter 6 . 6/30/2012
nice work hope your next one is out soon
Flatwaffles29 chapter 4 . 6/28/2012
Nice! Keep up the good work :) I look forward to how this pans out 3
Yawarakai-Bunny chapter 2 . 6/26/2012
I cant wait to read the next chapper O you better upload fast, missy or mister
Kes.R chapter 2 . 6/26/2012
Moooooreeeeeeeeee
sebby-fan chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
can't wait for more
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