|Reviews for Fantasy can happen in Rio|
| Rob The Ara Macao chapter 18 . 2/20
First: I laughed when Pedro said how preening is a way to help a couple get closer, nice one.
Second: I'm intrigued about "The dream" and Her? Who is Jules talking about?
I'm looking forward to know the answers.
| Strykeruk chapter 18 . 2/20
another nice and sweet chapter. I must admit that conversation with Jewel went quite well it seems. I wanted to quickly mention a theory I had regarding the formula... You know some diseases are specie specific like bird flu? What do you reckon would happen if a bird asked to be turned into another specie in order to not die? Moral question for Jules. :-)
Apart from that the chapter was awesome and I think you portrayed Jewel very well so congratulations. Loved the awkward preening conversation, one of the reasons I love Nico and Pedro.
Can't wait till the next chapter and the Samba scene. (If it is next chapter). I'm sure it will be awesome.
| Strykeruk chapter 17 . 1/15
Another awesome (and gargantuan) chapter. Still loving the mind games and desperate evasion. Can't wait to see a) the party and b) Jewels conversation. Plus of course anything else you're going to add.
Carry on the great work.
| Rob The Ara Macao chapter 17 . 1/14
I really thought Nico and Pedro would catch them this time but Tulio minimized the damage. I wonder what will happen at the Branch and what Jewel is planning with that "nice" chat.
| geust chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
have ana get turned into a human and decide to stay that way! then do a sequel with Ana as a human when Rio 2 comes out!
| Strykeruk chapter 16 . 10/17/2013
Dun dun duuuuuuuuu! hehehe Nice one Jixstun, yet another cliff-hanger episode... is that a good thing? Hmmmmmm... yes, yes it is. ;)
Evil machinations begin to appear in opposition to our feathery friends. What will happen I wonder?
Congrats on the dream sequence . I find it too much of a coincidence that at least three people were having nightmares at the same time. Now Blu and Jewel I can understand but Jules as well, something is not right there.
Anywho great characterisation again and I look forward to the next day with glee.
| Rob The Ara Macao chapter 16 . 10/16/2013
You caught me, I bit the bait, I really thought there was a predator in the Sanctuary, but I knew it was a nightmare when the three kittens appeared. Something as shocking as a formula that would change the species would produce nightmares to anyone, Im not surprised that more than one of them would suffer from that. I see Nico and Pedro will never give up with their almost perfect matchmaking score. I can only say one more thing about this chapter: magnificent.
| Cobalt the Spix Macaw chapter 16 . 10/16/2013
A very entertaining chapter.
The nightmare scene was legitimately creepy. It's very interesting that such events have caused physiological damage to Blu and Jewel (and possibly others)
I'm wondering how the mysterious group will affect the story. Hopefully thier presence will be uncovered and stopped before Jules's formula is discovered and leaked out to the rest of the world. It's a very serious matter that has me at the edge of my seat and anticipating the next chapter is unbearable.
| Cobalt the Spix Macaw chapter 14 . 10/14/2013
You should consider finishing this story.
I'm really enticed by the many sub plots here.
| Cobalt the Spix Macaw chapter 15 . 9/27/2013
This is written beautifully.
I'm still guessing wether or not Na truly likes Jueles that way.
| Rob The Ara Macao chapter 15 . 9/9/2013
Great chapter, I have to say I really laughed with the part of the parakeet with the inner ear infection problem, it was very funny,
| Strykeruk chapter 15 . 9/1/2013
Another awesome chapter, I don't know how you keep up this level of writing but you have my thanks. Keep it up :D
No criticism to offer as all seems good, I think you've got the characters down to a T and it shows.
Can't wait for more :)
| Annonymus chapter 14 . 6/21/2013
1. I think the evil boss dude is Nigel and they want to use the formula to turn themselves human so they can use weapons and stuff to kill their enemies.
And 2. Idea: when they get the formula ready, Blu Jewel and the other birds get turned Human by inhaling the formula(this is also where they explain themselves to Nico and Pedro).
| Rob The Ara Macao chapter 14 . 6/15/2013
Great chapter, I was worried about the update, a long time has passed since the last one but now Im relieved you did it. Im looking forward to know whats next, Im intrigued about those bad guys and what theyre planing.
| Strykeruk chapter 14 . 6/15/2013
Always glad to see an update by you. Thanks for the shootout, I'm happy to have helped.
Before I talk about the content I feel duty-bound to point out it's Sylvio not Slyvio. :-)
I'm glad to see the story progressing but I am getting really curious about the Bad guys now...
All throughout the second half I kept wondering when Jules and Ana are finally going to 'twig'. Hehehe can't be long now right? Am I right?
Since as you say this was a very exposition sciency chapter not too much to mention on character but I did find it enjoyable nevertheless.
One bit of advice I have is to break up the scene changes. At the moment it is a bit of a text wall. You might not have noticed but the program doesn't like double spaces so it removes them. Instead what I use is a line with just three X's in the middle to break it up a bit.
All in all another awesome update whilst I lag behind 'sigh' curse my writers block. Ah well thanks for the update!