Reviews for Harry Potter and the Power of Paranoia |
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Rori Potter chapter 1 . 6/26/2012 That was brilliant. Update soon. |
lycus chapter 1 . 6/26/2012 Get out of my mind, I had an idea about a story like this a while ago. But in mine Harry really had enough after the dementor attack when everyone seemed to be upset that Harry defended himself so after those letters he takes off, And the Order finds out later that he left leaving a strongly worded letter and they also find some old parchment that Harry doodled a certan bushy haired witches name with a different last name. Harry finds out he has a lot of magical blocks and survelance charms on him the goblins remove the survelance charms and Harry gets the blocks removed later and he goes through a very painful procedure to make him healthy he even meets some new loyal friends and he learns to come out of his shell and he learns how to fight not duel but fight as in if there's an enemy attacking him Harry is going to break his arms and legs and he stays away from everone intil he's seventeen he has no intention of returning to hogwarts intil the goblins inform him of a clause saying that as the last Potter it is mandatory that he attends Hogwarts and completes his N.E.W.T.S and he can't just test for them or his family vault goes on lockdown until another Potter can claim it. So he goes back to Hogwarts where he has to deal with all of the people who have hurt him are and still deal with his feelings for Hermione and the new un-improved ron and the insane dark lord and the manipulative old man but luckily his new friends move to Hogsmead and they don't fear deatheaters either. And I don't know why I wrote all of this, But I can't wait to see what happens next in your story. |
blueEyre chapter 1 . 6/26/2012 Oh, this story is great! I love paranoid Harry; he's so much fun. I'm really hoping there will be more updates. |
Toaneo07 Ver2.0 chapter 1 . 6/26/2012 what that...ok ,its great and freak hehehe i like |
CaribbeanTrinidadian chapter 1 . 6/26/2012 i think this is great, if it wasnt for malfoy,harry would've ended up in slytherin, it is time for him to use his cunning, what about how the weasleys-molly- were being so obvious as if they were waiting for him at the platform in his 1st yr,shouldnt molly have been cautious? , what about the basilisk?dumbledore did nothing to help harry? , all his friends doubted him, ginny is well creepy even if she grows out of the crush, cho is horrible,she never helped luna, harry could've fixed hi eye sight, his fathers family is all purebloods,why did dumbledore have his key,he never asked abut his parents will,nor other guardians,even dumbledore knew the scret keeper, he is not that daft, he should've gotten sirius a trial as head of wizardgermot , what abou harrys inheritance, his other magical guardians,what about taking his to madam pompfrey instead of questioning him?the sorting hat sees what type of qualities harry had, he had to have to seen harry's abuse from his relatives, harry was shy in his first year,he should've been in hufflepuff not in gryffindor evne ravenclaw,harry is smarter ,he used to fake his real grades for dudleys sake just so he wouldnt get punished, he would've been the top of his school, how did the hat ignore his abuse, and how could a child that hated attention,hate fame,glory and wasn't courageous ,barely outspoken end up in gryffindor, ron is an idiot,how did he and hermione get close, when he almost got her killed, it was harry who remembered the troll and harry is the one who distracted it,so many mistakes and unanswered questions, please update soon! |
raw666 chapter 1 . 6/26/2012 Nice start, can't wait to see what happens. |
Luiz4200 chapter 1 . 6/26/2012 Hilarious! Too bad Harry didn't go on with the plan to blow up the house. Will Harry leave before a "Death Eater" sees him? |
ObsessedWithHPFanFic chapter 1 . 6/26/2012 Good first chapter to your story. I like how paranoid Harry is and it seems to be motivating him to think. Thanks for sharing! |
Rainbow2007 chapter 1 . 6/26/2012 love it |
RobC chapter 1 . 6/26/2012 Some nice thoughts on Lupin. You're not paranoid if they really are out to get you. :) |
Armacryss chapter 1 . 6/26/2012 Good starter :) I like how he thinks about what happened before, the possible plot between Snape and Lupin, and all that. Nice ideas, as always. Can't wait for your next chapter. Thank you for your work ! |
xavierp chapter 1 . 6/26/2012 Nice bit of teenage angsting/paranoia going on here. I always hated how he just forgave everyone for anything they do to him, as long as he liked them: Sirius not being there? Forgiven! Remus disappearing? Forgiven! Ron/Hermione/Dumbledore doing their thing? Forgiven! Draco being an arse? Let's murder him! One thing: will this be a "Harry goes to a country and finds their magic is not only superior, but Voldemort in his travels never heard of it" or will thier be chase movie shenanigans as Harry avoids the DEs, the Order and the Ministry while living as a hermit in a cave? |
karthik9 chapter 1 . 6/26/2012 it is excellent chapter i look forward to future updates |