This story seems off to a good start. I interested in seeing where you go with this, and I did not notice any errors. Happy Writing.

Well done - you've built up a perfectly logical and convincing construct - and exactly as anyone might without any feedback, being able to bounce their ideas off anyone else.

cheers ...p

Heh considering the trouble Harry gets into, Paranoia does seem a lot more useful than love :-)

Looking forward to see if he'll ambush his "rescuers"

"don't do anything rash…" It was quite galling to be told not to be rash by a man who had served twelve years in the wizard prison, Azkaban, escaped, attempted to commit the murder he had been convicted for in the first place, then gone on the run with a stolen Hippogriff." - Not to mention ironic.

"He was currently moping around in his room wondering whom he could request to give him some news. Unfortunately for him in his four years at Hogwarts he had yet to make any real friends apart from Ron and Hermione and both of them had already stated they were unable to give him any news. He had gotten so frustrated that he had finally written back and told them that if they weren't going to tell him anything then he didn't see any point in writing to them at all. After that he had refused to send them a single owl. Oh, they had sent a few letters after that, but Harry had not bothered to reply and after seeing that they still weren't giving him any information had started throwing them away unopened." - When I read that paragraph, I got this inexplicable urge to say "Well done, Harry" (and I did not mean that in a sarcastic way at all).

"Growing up with the Dursley's I knew I couldn't depend on anyone but myself." - "Dursleys".

"* As things stood the only place he knew off to get a hold off a copy was Diagon Alley and he was stuck at Privet Drive totally unable to go there." - "the only place he knew of".

Yay! for Dobby.

"Lucius Malfoy could walk in and Avada Kedavra me in the great hall at breakfast and Dumbledore would probably have been the one to happily invite him in - the incompetent old goat." - Yay! for that thought.

"He spent a few blissful minutes imagining the faces of the Dursley's when they came back to their home to find it nothing but a smoking hole in the ground." - "Dursleys".

"The next morning Harry was pouring over the guidebooks that Dobby had heard from him." - "poring over the guidebooks that Dobby got for him".

Wow, how soon can you update, please? As I am now SO curious about what will happen next.

That was brilliant. Update soon.

Get out of my mind, I had an idea about a story like this a while ago. But in mine Harry really had enough after the dementor attack when everyone seemed to be upset that Harry defended himself so after those letters he takes off, And the Order finds out later that he left leaving a strongly worded letter and they also find some old parchment that Harry doodled a certan bushy haired witches name with a different last name. Harry finds out he has a lot of magical blocks and survelance charms on him the goblins remove the survelance charms and Harry gets the blocks removed later and he goes through a very painful procedure to make him healthy he even meets some new loyal friends and he learns to come out of his shell and he learns how to fight not duel but fight as in if there's an enemy attacking him Harry is going to break his arms and legs and he stays away from everone intil he's seventeen he has no intention of returning to hogwarts intil the goblins inform him of a clause saying that as the last Potter it is mandatory that he attends Hogwarts and completes his N.E.W.T.S and he can't just test for them or his family vault goes on lockdown until another Potter can claim it. So he goes back to Hogwarts where he has to deal with all of the people who have hurt him are and still deal with his feelings for Hermione and the new un-improved ron and the insane dark lord and the manipulative old man but luckily his new friends move to Hogsmead and they don't fear deatheaters either. And I don't know why I wrote all of this, But I can't wait to see what happens next in your story.

Oh, this story is great! I love paranoid Harry; he's so much fun. I'm really hoping there will be more updates.

what that...ok ,its great and freak hehehe i like

i think this is great, if it wasnt for malfoy,harry would've ended up in slytherin, it is time for him to use his cunning, what about how the weasleys-molly- were being so obvious as if they were waiting for him at the platform in his 1st yr,shouldnt molly have been cautious? , what about the basilisk?dumbledore did nothing to help harry? , all his friends doubted him, ginny is well creepy even if she grows out of the crush, cho is horrible,she never helped luna, harry could've fixed hi eye sight, his fathers family is all purebloods,why did dumbledore have his key,he never asked abut his parents will,nor other guardians,even dumbledore knew the scret keeper, he is not that daft, he should've gotten sirius a trial as head of wizardgermot , what abou harrys inheritance, his other magical guardians,what about taking his to madam pompfrey instead of questioning him?the sorting hat sees what type of qualities harry had, he had to have to seen harry's abuse from his relatives, harry was shy in his first year,he should've been in hufflepuff not in gryffindor evne ravenclaw,harry is smarter ,he used to fake his real grades for dudleys sake just so he wouldnt get punished, he would've been the top of his school, how did the hat ignore his abuse, and how could a child that hated attention,hate fame,glory and wasn't courageous ,barely outspoken end up in gryffindor, ron is an idiot,how did he and hermione get close, when he almost got her killed, it was harry who remembered the troll and harry is the one who distracted it,so many mistakes and unanswered questions, please update soon!

Nice start, can't wait to see what happens.

Hilarious! Too bad Harry didn't go on with the plan to blow up the house. Will Harry leave before a "Death Eater" sees him?

Good first chapter to your story. I like how paranoid Harry is and it seems to be motivating him to think. Thanks for sharing!

love it

Some nice thoughts on Lupin. You're not paranoid if they really are out to get you. :)

Good starter :)

I like how he thinks about what happened before, the possible plot between Snape and Lupin, and all that. Nice ideas, as always.

Can't wait for your next chapter.

Thank you for your work !