Reviews for Harry Potter and the Power of Paranoia
TxA-GunFighter chapter 14 . 1/16/2014
Good chapter and story.

gunny
TxA-GunFighter chapter 13 . 1/16/2014
Nice chapter.

gunny
TxA-GunFighter chapter 12 . 1/16/2014
Good chapter, ya' gotta love Luna.

gunny
TxA-GunFighter chapter 11 . 1/16/2014
Really good chapter.

gunny
TxA-GunFighter chapter 10 . 1/16/2014
Good chapter.

gunny
TxA-GunFighter chapter 9 . 1/16/2014
Awesome chapter, you are evil...lol.

gunny
TxA-GunFighter chapter 8 . 1/16/2014
Awesome chapter, really great stuff.

gunny
TxA-GunFighter chapter 7 . 1/16/2014
Very good chapter.

gunny
TxA-GunFighter chapter 6 . 1/15/2014
Good one.

gunny
TxA-GunFighter chapter 5 . 1/15/2014
Good chapter.

gunny
TxA-GunFighter chapter 4 . 1/15/2014
Fine chapter.

gunny
TxA-GunFighter chapter 3 . 1/15/2014
Really good chapter.

gunny
TxA-GunFighter chapter 2 . 1/15/2014
good chapter.

gunny
TxA-GunFighter chapter 1 . 1/15/2014
Good start.

gunny
Candie Pie chapter 18 . 1/11/2014
JKR's septology did have its share of plot holes, but I always excused her because she was writing for children about children. Also, magic is a delicate thing to work with. Without any concrete rules, how can you avoid god-moding? Which leads to awkward "well if you can do x, then why can't you do y?" questions. But it was never about the mythology, it was about the story, so I don't fault her too much for it.

I liked your take on magic-the idea that it can be done industriously. The only problem I have is sometimes it seems like Harry's god-moding, but it's all light hearted enough that I don't really care. IMHO, this is the pinnacle of what fan fiction can be. I love your writing style and characterizations, I love the off-beat story, I love the humor, I LOVE EVERYTHING. I think this is my favorite.
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