Reviews for Honest Liar
Guest chapter 17 . 2/18/2013
HOly crap! What a cluster fuck. Poor Bella. And why did he get a vasectomy?
slc6548 chapter 17 . 2/18/2013
Wow! Good chapter!
Alice's White Rabbit chapter 17 . 2/18/2013
"See me. Save me. Please." But, does she see him? Can see see through all the lies to find the scared, lonely person hiding inside?

In Edward's defense, he did make a huge step forward in this chapter. He admitted he has a problem. But, is that enough to make up for all the lies? Especially the huge lie in this chapter. These two have such a huge gap to bridge between them.

Thanks!

Sally
lee21761 chapter 17 . 2/18/2013
omg...why? How and when did he have it. Did he not want anymore of him in the world? He's so broken my poor Edward...Oh this is a killer...such a good good killer...
JenTeal chapter 17 . 2/18/2013
Wow Edward is really a jerk in this chapter. It's nice to find out that Bella was willing to help him with his problem.
Vaena chapter 17 . 2/18/2013
This is heart breaking. And way too long between updates :(
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 17 . 2/18/2013
WTF? He is ALL SORTS of fucked up! How could he do that and then lie to her?
How could he take away her option to have children, then let her suffer with hope?
I have had compassion, but I'm with Bella here. This would be my breaking point.
jel19 chapter 17 . 2/18/2013
Rips my heart right out to read about his and her anguish! Oh Edward, you have to make this right and get the help you need. Bella, if you love him, you have to hang in and see him through this. Please update soon. This is a story that haunts me and I just want more, sooner.
stormy315 chapter 17 . 2/18/2013
great chapter...why did he do this? now i get why she left and gave up. how can you trust someone who acts like this? looking forward to the next chapter...
ElaineUK chapter 17 . 2/18/2013
I was so happy to see this update in my inbox. Wow, you know it never crossed my mind that Edward had a vasectomy. I'd worked out he was infertile, but had assumed it was due to mumps - something outside his control. What a mess. Can't wait to find out why.
Shi-ting chapter 17 . 2/18/2013
I love this story, but I think I want to read it in the correct order because I just keep forgetting what is what.

Thanks for updating.
Mari31 chapter 17 . 2/18/2013
Great chapter! Their lifes is always so angsty and all I want is some solution for everything...
Can't wait for more.
See you soon!
jbwebb chapter 17 . 2/18/2013
Well, he is an honest liar I suppose. I get that what he needs to be is so horrible for Bella to leave. A drug addiction isn't. That is not his fault. She could forgive that. Addiction isn't something you willingly do, but a vasectomy? Forget it. This is the only thing that she won't be able to forgive. His self loathing is so strong, he doesnt want a child. Which is what he will tell her, but then five years later, he spends all his time with one and figures out he can be a good parent. Bella will see this too and they will reconcile probably maybe adopting or surrogacy. Can't wait for more!
meepison chapter 17 . 2/18/2013
So very sad. He hated himself so much. Was the end of their before? It feels that way to me. Did the end lead him to rehab or did he need to fall further...
I have hope because of the after. Sad, heartbreaking, beautiful story.
jansails chapter 17 . 2/18/2013
Edward's told his truth, but he's not giving Bella a real plan on how to quit.
Too many lies, too many secrets.
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