Reviews for Honest Liar
pilotnana chapter 10 . 8/21/2012
You really know how to build ust and you know how to deliver smut that is sexy without being vulgar. I loved this chapter. I love your E. Thanks for sharing (and please please please try tr to give a sooner update!) Xx
slc6548 chapter 10 . 8/21/2012
Very good chapter.
bbp1 chapter 10 . 8/21/2012
Great Chapter...shame they can't always be this happy!
CrookedArm chapter 10 . 8/21/2012
Brilliant. Love it, love the style of Edward's thoughts. I'm reading the before, knowing what happens in the after and it gives me this gnawing feeling in the pit of my gut. "I want to live in the world as you see it." DAMN that's good writing!
SirRachel chapter 10 . 8/21/2012
This story kills me, but I love it oh-so-much. Thanks for an update :)
HollBeth chapter 10 . 8/21/2012
The whole chapter was such a bittersweet glimpse, but this was the best of it all:
"Kissing you naked in our house. I want to kiss you naked in our house forever."

I want to suffocate in your expectations.

I want to live in the world as you see it.

I want to die trying.

(Thank you for that...)
Guest chapter 10 . 8/21/2012
Poor Edward is so stuck in his head, he can't see a way out. I feel so bad.
kikirev chapter 10 . 8/21/2012
"I want to live in the world as you see it"...gorgeous, beautiful, says so much about where he is and where he wants to be but doesn't know how to get there.
ejjcullen chapter 10 . 8/21/2012
love it.
Alice's White Rabbit chapter 10 . 8/21/2012
I love how you go back and forth between the 'before' and the 'after'. It really helps to balance out the sadness that pervades the 'after'. I love seeing them so happy ... even if it's just for a little bit. But, so much of what Edward says is bittersweet knowing what will come in the future. All his 'forever' statements hurt just a little. Especially when he tells those little lies. He has no idea that all these little lies will eventually bury him.


divyvicki chapter 10 . 8/21/2012
Still a little confused about the whys of them being apart. Keeping interested though.
LoveMeSomeAngst chapter 10 . 8/21/2012
God, it's so heartbreaking how much he loves her, but just couldn't get himself together enough not to fall apart. I'm so hoping he can pick up the pieces and work hard to make a happy life.
Just Me Alone chapter 10 . 8/21/2012
You amaze me...I love your words, love what you do with them, even when they break my heart, this time it didn't...And the way Bella talks to Edward, I swear I tell my Hubs the same things.

Just amazing...
Julia-S77 chapter 10 . 8/21/2012
So poignant, if only they could go back to being that happy. Great chapter x
keyboardkath chapter 10 . 8/21/2012
They used to be so happy. It just makes the 'after' all the more sad. What happened in between? I am dying to know.
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