Reviews for Honest Liar
Guest chapter 10 . 8/21/2012
Poor Edward is so stuck in his head, he can't see a way out. I feel so bad.
kikirev chapter 10 . 8/21/2012
"I want to live in the world as you see it"...gorgeous, beautiful, says so much about where he is and where he wants to be but doesn't know how to get there.
ejjcullen chapter 10 . 8/21/2012
love it.
Alice's White Rabbit chapter 10 . 8/21/2012
I love how you go back and forth between the 'before' and the 'after'. It really helps to balance out the sadness that pervades the 'after'. I love seeing them so happy ... even if it's just for a little bit. But, so much of what Edward says is bittersweet knowing what will come in the future. All his 'forever' statements hurt just a little. Especially when he tells those little lies. He has no idea that all these little lies will eventually bury him.


divyvicki chapter 10 . 8/21/2012
Still a little confused about the whys of them being apart. Keeping interested though.
LoveMeSomeAngst chapter 10 . 8/21/2012
God, it's so heartbreaking how much he loves her, but just couldn't get himself together enough not to fall apart. I'm so hoping he can pick up the pieces and work hard to make a happy life.
Just Me Alone chapter 10 . 8/21/2012
You amaze me...I love your words, love what you do with them, even when they break my heart, this time it didn't...And the way Bella talks to Edward, I swear I tell my Hubs the same things.

Just amazing...
Julia-S77 chapter 10 . 8/21/2012
So poignant, if only they could go back to being that happy. Great chapter x
keyboardkath chapter 10 . 8/21/2012
They used to be so happy. It just makes the 'after' all the more sad. What happened in between? I am dying to know.
Guest chapter 10 . 8/21/2012
They deserve a HEA. I feel so bad for their separation
Kdub4127 chapter 10 . 8/21/2012
Still love this story. Cant wait to read more
Erikajo chapter 10 . 8/20/2012
SO beautifully written.
slcottin chapter 10 . 8/20/2012
Something about this story just rips me raw. I am not sure how to even explain it.

I am in until the bitter end...
Team Marylou chapter 10 . 8/20/2012
THIS is my favorite chapter to date. It gives me hope that Edward and Bella will get back together in this story. A chapter FREE of angst & upset is what I needed...what this story needed.

Thank u..I adore this story...brilliantly written!
MoniNP Monica Nopi chapter 10 . 8/20/2012
Awww...Wish they would've stayed like that forever.. *sighs*.. ty bb.. xx - M
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